Comments | intrikate88: Fic: Nineteen (Doctor/Rose)

intrikate88

Fic: Nineteen (Doctor/Rose)

Nov 22, 2007 21:10

Title: Nineteen
Author: intrikate88
Word Count: 151
Spoilers: “Doomsday”
Pairing: Nine/Rose, Ten/Rose
Summary: She’s always nineteen for him.

She’s nineteen when she meets him, but not really. He suspects she’s lied about her age, but doesn’t know for sure until they travel from 2005 to 1987, and see her at six months old. He never says anything about it ( Read more... )

characters: ten, characters: nine, doctor, tv: doctor who, rose, fic

Comments 29

Continuity? Pfft, who needs it? maypanic November 23 2007, 04:49:31 UTC

There is an aching sweetness in this ficlet- you pack a punch with a few words.

Also- because I had to go visit your profile- Hi, neighbor!

Re: Continuity? Pfft, who needs it? maypanic November 23 2007, 04:51:09 UTC

And because I just realized my profile is rather generic and that last comment could come across as a wee bit creepy- Kennesaw, myself.

Re: Continuity? Pfft, who needs it? intrikate88 November 23 2007, 05:22:31 UTC

I don't have a stalker? How disappointing! :P Nah, I figured it was something like that. I myself am nearly in Kennesaw and only just barely have a Marietta address, so we really are neighbors! Nice to meet you!

And I'm so glad you liked my fic! :D

starlightmoonla November 23 2007, 08:12:35 UTC

Awww *sniff* I think that part that really got to me was the ending where he is celebrating her birthday and he hopes she has one as well.

Though a tad depressing you did a wonderful job with this story! :)

intrikate88 November 23 2007, 16:52:45 UTC

Aww, thank you!

dave7 November 23 2007, 09:24:49 UTC

Oh, that's just gorgeous. :) (And makes so much more sense of the time line! This is now my personal canon.)

Thanks for sharing this. :)

intrikate88 November 23 2007, 16:53:39 UTC

SCORE I MADE PERSONAL CANON. <333

Thank you for commenting!

nycteris_m November 23 2007, 09:58:54 UTC

aw the cupcake had me *tears* that's so sweet...

I loved having both the view of nine and ten about her being only 19 too... wonderful!

intrikate88 November 23 2007, 16:54:08 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you!

goldy_dollar November 23 2007, 19:11:19 UTC

Her clothes still turn up in odd places and he would swear he sometimes hears her voice echoing down the corridors.

*SOB*

goldy_dollar November 23 2007, 19:12:26 UTC

Oh, and you know. I've never really thought about the continuity age issue thing before and you KNOW how I tend to obsess over small details from this show. I'm assuming that RTD just kind of screwed up (they do that), but very interesting take on it.

intrikate88 November 23 2007, 19:16:08 UTC

Well, since Rose seemingly being born in 1987 is only a year before the year I was born, I figured out quite quickly that things just didn't add up. It probably is just a screw up. Or a seventeen year old girl wanting people to think she's older. (Yeah, like that ever happens.)

I just liked the parallels! :P

intrikate88 November 23 2007, 19:13:43 UTC

God. It wasn't THAT sad when I wrote it. :P