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intorolude

We need a replay (1/2)

Oct 29, 2010 14:04

we need a replay (1/2)
gen, onjongkey friendship
13,350 words
If anything, recognizing the signs of their slow slide to falling apart had made it worse.

( He doesn't know when it started, this slow dismantling of their group, and he doesn't know why it's taken this long for him to figure it out. )

writings, pairing: ot3, length: oneshot, genre: general, fandom: shinee

Comments 6

kaybee38 October 30 2010, 00:51:11 UTC

This is just ...incredible. Your writing is so real. and there's just the right amount of humor so that it's not all-angsty. I can actually see everything you wrote happening. And I'm reeling from the shock of the "Milk Club". I'd never heard of it, and I thought you made it up till I googled it. And JINKI'S IN IT?! SM just doesn't take care of their artists I swear. (sigh)

-----> off to read next part

redcottonstar October 31 2010, 09:36:57 UTC

thank you! yeah, i was really shocked when the news about the milk club first came up too :(

piuupiu October 30 2010, 23:51:32 UTC

aw, I don't have much to say, but good job :)

redcottonstar October 31 2010, 09:37:08 UTC

thank you! :)

snakes_gift January 3 2013, 15:26:13 UTC

Wow! This is heartbreaking but so good! I know this was posted in 2010 but I want to tell you that this is wonderfully written. It feels so real. Too real, in fact and that scares me :( But thank you.

jinkibiased February 18 2017, 22:22:53 UTC

do people still remember the milk club? I was so sad when I found out what it was. especially what leeteuk had said about it.
I just wanted to tell you that you writjng is very inspiring. you manage to capture emotions but still depict them in a realistic almost minimalistic way. it is almost like poetry. especially 'and/or'.