growing up and apart

Mar 30, 2010 21:38

growing up and apart
onew/key
1062 words
Jinki had wanted more than Kibum could give, Kibum was too jaded to believe in love that could last forever.

Kibum turns, and the look in his eyes shatters what is left of Jinki's heart. )

writings, genre: angst, pairing: onew/key, length: oneshot, fandom: shinee

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mankadi March 30 2010, 19:57:12 UTC
aww gosh i wanna cry right now ;_____;
onkey D:
breaking up ;__;
*cry very loud*
still it was amazing~
written so beautiful.. i can feel feelings in this fic.. ^^
i wans a happy sequal though :)
<33

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redcottonstar March 31 2010, 14:18:44 UTC
thank you! haha there might be? :)

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aprilsfool6 March 30 2010, 20:29:05 UTC
Cried. Ugh. And it did not help that I had Kyuhyun and Ryeowook's solo from SSI playing on iTunes

Anyhoo, this was great. Loved the awkwardness that still lingered after the breakup. Would love to see what Key has gone through after the breakup too.

Thanks for sharing.

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redcottonstar March 31 2010, 14:18:55 UTC
thank you! :)

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imagine_necktie March 30 2010, 20:49:55 UTC
this was amazing, just plain beautiful. ;_;

I'm at a loss for words. But I'm so memming this.

thanks for sharing~ <3

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redcottonstar March 31 2010, 14:19:08 UTC
ty for reading and commenting! :)

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2pmconspiracy March 30 2010, 22:07:38 UTC
Spot spot! :D

Back to comment aft school~ and goshhh! I love that there's so many onkey updates on replay! :D

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redcottonstar March 31 2010, 14:19:23 UTC
hahaha onkey! 8)

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2pmconspiracy April 1 2010, 12:22:58 UTC
hello bb! this was SO FREAKING AWESOMEEE! :D

and im sorry i took so long to comment D: i was supposed to yesterday, but i was kinda caught up with studying and writing my own fic~ and i should stop ranting now xP

"Sorry," he says quietly.

Kibum finishes his orange juice, pushes it away. "For what?"

For hurting you. For ruining it all. For not being able to tell the truth. For still thinking of you every fucking day. "You know," Jinki says.

i loved this line so freaking much! and idk why xD but yes, i loved this <3

thank you so much for sharing! this was really heartbreaking, but yet so beautifully written and perfect at the same time!

i loved this so much! ♥

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x_urbia March 30 2010, 23:13:17 UTC
That's beautiful, bb.

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redcottonstar March 31 2010, 14:19:32 UTC
thank you! :'D

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