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intorolude

growing up and apart

Mar 30, 2010 21:38

growing up and apart
onew/key
1062 words
Jinki had wanted more than Kibum could give, Kibum was too jaded to believe in love that could last forever.

( Kibum turns, and the look in his eyes shatters what is left of Jinki's heart. )

writings, genre: angst, pairing: onew/key, length: oneshot, fandom: shinee

Comments 46

namae_nai March 30 2010, 14:11:47 UTC

;__; perfect.

redcottonstar March 31 2010, 14:14:09 UTC

thank you! ;_;

sakura_seasons March 30 2010, 14:13:03 UTC

listened to the song and cried ;___;
thank you for the fic!

redcottonstar March 31 2010, 14:14:21 UTC

the song is wonderful! *_* thank you!

bernicelee March 30 2010, 14:14:56 UTC

this was really good! honestly.
I smiled at the ending because it was just so...nice.
this gave me a soothing effect somehow.
awesome work.

thank you so much for writing. (:

redcottonstar March 31 2010, 14:14:32 UTC

thank you! :)

allaboutm March 30 2010, 14:24:01 UTC

Awwwwwwww~

This is utterly cute (*o*)
Their relationship is exactly how it supposes to be. I mean with them being apart, Jinki being too young to understand and avoiding any sort of confrontation (being in a stupid bank instead of standing on stage, oh-so-Jinki).
So, Jinki is a coward, fact. But at least, he tried to say it all (a poor attempt, i confess). And Kibum is so precious. The last sentence awwwww Kibum FTW I wanna say!

Am I being too much if I tend to ask for a sequel? x)

redcottonstar March 31 2010, 14:14:59 UTC

sequel? hahaha we'll have to see! :D

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redcottonstar March 31 2010, 14:15:50 UTC

/happy from the jjong glomp

hahaha idk about a sequel yet, but there might be...? :)