building thatandthis into Thus; rachel/quinn, pg

[intobrakelights]

Title: building thatandthis into Thus
Author: intobrakelights
Pairing: Rachel/Quinn.
Rating: PG (except for brief but strong language)
Length: ~4200
Spoilers: There's really nothing but vague allusions, mostly, but I guess we'll say up through "Special Education," just in case.
Warnings: Definite fluff included, be warned.
Summary: Pieces of Rachel and Quinn's shared

Comments

[chaoschild92]

This is so pretty! I feel like I'm surrounded by pretty, pretty writing. This writing would sparkle if words had a more physical form. Or possibly glow, gently.

It's absolutely gorgeous. I love the flow of this piece. And the language. And the imagery. And everything!

(On a side note there were a couple of sentences that got a little confusing and a couple of typographical errors. I would suggest reading it aloud to yourself, but that might just be because I'm obsessive.)

In the wake of that let me reiterate once again how amazing you and your fic are. I just loved every inch of this.

[intobrakelights]

Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. I'm just...really flattered. ♥ Thank you, thank you.

(Also, yes so much to the need for editing, which I did and hopefully it's more coherent now. The truth is I finished writing and editing at 4:30 in the morning and was falling asleep throughout, so when I woke up the next day and read through it and I kind of panicked. So many awkward sentence and typos, wow. So, yes, very good suggestion.)

Again, just. Thank you.

[motylik]

This is beautiful. Seriously gorgeous. <3 <3 I don't think there are other words to express how amazing this is. :)

[intobrakelights]

Wow, thank you. I don't think there are any words at all to express how flattered I am.

[cyberninjasio]

This is pretty straight-up awesome, just got to say. I love the pacing and how everything flows deliberately without seeming deliberate (if that makes any sense) from one moment to the next. It's got a very natural, organic feel. Two thumbs up!

[intobrakelights]

I'm glad the rhythm of it worked for you - I wasn't sure about it when I wrote it, but that's just sort of what ended up coming out, so I'm so glad you enjoyed. Thank you. :)

[kittyspotneko]

adorable :)

[intobrakelights]

Aw, thanks!

[rusty_tiffany]

this is gorgeous.

[intobrakelights]

Seriously, thank you very much.