Comments | intobrakelights: building thatandthis into Thus; rachel/quinn, pg

intobrakelights

building thatandthis into Thus; rachel/quinn, pg

Jan 13, 2011 04:16

Title: building thatandthis into Thus
Author: intobrakelights
Pairing: Rachel/Quinn.
Rating: PG (except for brief but strong language)
Length: ~4200
Spoilers: There's really nothing but vague allusions, mostly, but I guess we'll say up through "Special Education," just in case.
Warnings: Definite fluff included, be warned.
Summary: Pieces of Rachel and Quinn's shared ( Read more... )

Comments 38

glee_addict January 13 2011, 22:46:12 UTC

wow! just wow!

intobrakelights January 15 2011, 23:28:21 UTC

Eee, thank you!

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intobrakelights January 15 2011, 23:28:57 UTC

Thank you so much for commenting on it, seriously, that's so amazing. I'm so glad you liked it.

vsquared_k January 14 2011, 02:48:57 UTC

You left me breathless. completely and utterly breathless... it's just so beautiful

intobrakelights January 15 2011, 23:29:29 UTC

Oh, wow. I...just, thank you.

vsquared_k January 16 2011, 07:42:44 UTC

No, thank you
It's gorgeous.

miss_darkmoon January 14 2011, 03:11:21 UTC

Oh my gosh. You made me cry. Congratulations.

That was absolutely phenomenal. I loved the moments you picked, the description was just fantastic, and... I love your prose, and some of your repetitions, like the last lines...

By 3:30, Rachel Berry knows the heart of a girl who thought she’d lost it altogether.

That was the first line that just blew me away.

Rachel’s always been fond of her destined-for-Broadway name, but she realizes, as Quinn breathes it into her ear over and over, like fear and relief and love-like family-that she has never loved it more than she does in that moment.

And oh my god that line... oh my god that scene...

I'm like in a happy Faberry bubble :D Holy crap.

Also, I'm pretty sure by now rachberry gets the best birthday presents ever.

intobrakelights January 15 2011, 23:30:51 UTC

Aw, crying was definitely not my intention, but this comment makes me so unbelievably happy, you don't even know.

Thank you so much. ♥ I know I say that a lot and I just mean it so much. Thank you for bothering to leave this comment - I really, really appreciate it.

miss_darkmoon January 21 2011, 07:05:46 UTC

Sorry replying took me so long... wow. Five days. This is like, second page of my inbox. My inbox fills up fast when I don't lurk anymore ( ... )

miss_darkmoon January 21 2011, 07:06:20 UTC

(also, I cry with happy/excitement.emotion, not just sad, so... lol)

malexfaith January 14 2011, 03:28:42 UTC

Amazing writing. Such a powerful fic. Very enjoyable read. Thanks heaps for sharing

intobrakelights January 15 2011, 23:31:21 UTC

Thank you for deciding to comment - and for what you said. :)