Killer Instinct

May 17, 2009 19:27


Title: Killer Instinct

Fandom: Avatar: the Last Airbender

Character(s): Katara

Pairing(s): None

Rating: T

Genre: Drama/Horror

Warning(s): Semi-graphic descriptions

Word Count: 563

Prompt: Katara and Bloodbending (for Read more... )

prompt(s): requested fic, [atla]character: katara, genre: horror, fandom: avatar: the last airbender, genre: drama

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be_themoon May 18 2009, 00:16:10 UTC
Holy crap! You're so good at creating these dark scenarios with only a few words, and it really came across. I got the political ramifications, the emotions, everything running rampant, and Katara's thoughts were so real. Really, really good work! Eeee yay! <33333 I love it, thank you so much!

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darkauthor26 May 24 2009, 21:36:44 UTC
^3^ I'm so glad you like it! Particularly Katara's thoughts because it was a bit hard to juggle between making her motivation seem too weak to try and attempt what she did and making it come across too strong (even for Katara).

You're welcome! ^_^

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aerodactylus May 24 2009, 23:19:11 UTC
I like this. You did a really good job of illustrating how Katara feels about the consequences of wielding a power like bloodbending. Especially given the opportunity to use it on Azula...very powerful. You handled this well.

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darkauthor26 May 28 2009, 01:26:04 UTC
Thank you! :)

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lye_tea May 24 2009, 23:20:42 UTC
darkauthor26 May 28 2009, 01:28:09 UTC
Than she lets on? XD I think Katara lets us get a pretty good look at her darker side on several occassions. And it's so much fun to think about, especially since that dark side only comes out when she's protecting people she cares about. I think that might be the creepist part. D:

Thank you!

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obsessive0514 May 24 2009, 23:41:10 UTC
Wow. It's been awhile since I've read a dark!Katara fic. This was haunting. Great job!

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darkauthor26 May 28 2009, 01:29:01 UTC
Thank you! :D

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chickosaurusrex May 25 2009, 01:55:16 UTC
I don't usually have time to read fanfic these days, but I'm glad I did check this little one out. Very well done. :)

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darkauthor26 May 28 2009, 01:29:59 UTC
I'm glad you took the time too--both to read it and comment. :) Thank you so much!

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