Holy crap! You're so good at creating these dark scenarios with only a few words, and it really came across. I got the political ramifications, the emotions, everything running rampant, and Katara's thoughts were so real. Really, really good work! Eeee yay! <33333 I love it, thank you so much!
^3^ I'm so glad you like it! Particularly Katara's thoughts because it was a bit hard to juggle between making her motivation seem too weak to try and attempt what she did and making it come across too strong (even for Katara).
I like this. You did a really good job of illustrating how Katara feels about the consequences of wielding a power like bloodbending. Especially given the opportunity to use it on Azula...very powerful. You handled this well.
Than she lets on? XD I think Katara lets us get a pretty good look at her darker side on several occassions. And it's so much fun to think about, especially since that dark side only comes out when she's protecting people she cares about. I think that might be the creepist part. D:
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You're welcome! ^_^
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Thank you!
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