I can actually hear the characters voices in my head. I love stories like this where we have to read/watch the characters make these tough, yet dark decisions. It really reveals character. :)
Oh wow, this was powerful. I was actually thinking about something like this the other day. Are you in my head? I love reading fics where Katara shows her darker side, and I think you got it spot-on.
Thank you! No, I'm in your closet. :D Katara's darker side is a lot of fun to think and write about because it only comes out when she's protecting people she cares about and not out of any real sort of selfish desire.
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You have much potential as a writer.
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