Comments | interpretthis: Fic: Dark Meat

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Fic: Dark Meat

Mar 27, 2007 19:38

Title: Dark Meat

Author: interpretthis

Fandom: Lost

Pairing: Ben/Juliet

Rating: G

Sin: Gluttony

Summary: Ben and Juliet have had chicken for dinner one too many times. (Dark fic of course!)
Notes: Written for ( Read more... )

7_deadly_sins_, fic challenges, ben/juliet, lost fic, fic

Comments 10

orangeokapi13 March 28 2007, 03:05:07 UTC

Hahaha That's great! I love the part about the polar bear!

interpretthis March 28 2007, 03:10:02 UTC

Thanks! :)

skinny_bacon March 28 2007, 03:17:57 UTC

I love you. It's as simple as that. This fic was awesome. It started so wonderfully dark and creepy - Ben as his best. Then the end - funny yet also keenly twisted, kind of like it is funny in the way only Evil!Ben can be funny. And I love how you set this in current times, the implication of their relationship continuing even after what Ben knows Juliet attempted during surgery. Wow. I do believe I owe you a fic after this one. Brilliant, my friend. *hugs*

interpretthis March 28 2007, 03:27:07 UTC

kind of like it is funny in the way only Evil!Ben can be funny.
Oh excellent; I love his humor. Thank you so much!

And I love how you set this in current times, the implication of their relationship continuing even after what Ben knows Juliet attempted during surgery.
I saw it sort of as Ben reaffirming his control. Juliet didn't get him, and now it's his turn to brag in his own special, creepy way. :)

And a fic? Pour moi? *grins* Yay!

aurorawest March 28 2007, 14:02:39 UTC

Loved it! :) I really liked how you set it close to the events of 3.13. I actually did a bit of a double take when Ben's wheelchair got mentioned!

interpretthis March 29 2007, 03:35:42 UTC

Thanks very much! And the element of surprise is always fun, so I'm glad there was a bit of that. :)

tinkerbell99 March 28 2007, 22:36:17 UTC

Wow - this is an interesting piece! As I started reading, I had it in my mind that it occurred sometime in the past, but with the mention of the wheelchair, it turns it on a whole new angle. This is an interesting peek into what could be their relationship now. I love how Ben was written as explosive then quiet but always in control. Well done!

interpretthis March 29 2007, 03:41:19 UTC

I love how Ben was written as explosive then quiet but always in control.
What a wonderful way to put it; that's just what I love so much about Ben. :)

Thanks so much!

twisk April 5 2007, 11:54:12 UTC

I love reading such a small normal scenes between Ben and Juliet :] I really like this fick!

interpretthis April 23 2007, 23:42:33 UTC

Thanks very much! The normal scenes are almost as great as the crazy ones, which is one of the reasons I love these two so much. :)