Hearts End

Jul 29, 2010 21:54

Minwook for Nina, with her sad ending.

Title: Hearts End
Author: insanityplays
Rating: R for sexual situations
Pairing: Minwook, Kyuwook, Onesided!Kyumin
Characters: Sungmin, Ryeowook, Kyuhyun
Summary: Sungmin had always been in love with Kyuhyun, so when Kyuhyun gives his heart away, it’s just not something Sungmin can let go of lightly.
Disclaimer: I do ( Read more... )

pairing: kyuwook, for!nina, sockpuppet!nina, ♥nina, fics!oneshot, fandom!super junior, nina is a porn hoarder, pairing: minwook

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rawrstarrr July 30 2010, 10:37:58 UTC
This is beautiful---------- so beautiful. T___T

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insanityplays July 30 2010, 15:02:31 UTC
Lawl xD <3 Thank you very much

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bluefireflies July 30 2010, 11:04:11 UTC
Brilliant

i really love this and i really craving to read kyuminwook just like this story going, how Sungmin finally turn from revenge to loving both Kyuhyun and Ryeowook and Ryeowook who cannot resist Sungmin but somehow still didn't want to lose Kyuhyun.

i think i convince now that myself are a masochist who enjoying the conflict between her OTPs towards each other XD
Thank you for making this dear the Minwook and Kyuwook here are so intrigue,i'm memm-ing this &hearts&hearts&hearts

btw is this your new journal?

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insanityplays July 30 2010, 15:04:13 UTC
8DDD I love the Kyuminwook triangle as well, and for a while while I was writing it I was thinking about trying to make it the KRS ending, but it ended up like this instead :O But yea, I'll probably end up writing just KRS one day :P

lololol i love that you found me. i'm pretty sure you know who i am ;D

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littleplant July 30 2010, 11:27:33 UTC
This is brilliant ♥

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insanityplays July 30 2010, 15:05:09 UTC
xD Thank you ♥

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supergelie July 30 2010, 12:15:28 UTC
what is with the rhyming words? XD yeah there were rhyming words, at one point i decided to read it like a poem XD

very interesting...yes yes...XD i lyk it haha

poor kyu XD wookie's such a whore haha

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insanityplays July 30 2010, 15:06:16 UTC
LMFAO <3 When I was writing it, I just kept letting my fingers move on their own, and wrote whatever came to mind. I used to write poetry, so I'm not so surprised when I write slightly mindlessly like that, it comes out slightly like a poem :D I FEEL SO BAD FOR MAKING WOOK A WHORE xDD But thank you, glad you liked it!

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stripysockz July 30 2010, 22:14:33 UTC
This was amazing! The romance was so dark and convoluted, but it made perfect sense, because even though Sungmin's motives were so twisted it was still possible to understand them, in a way. I love his characterisation so much here, the possessiveness, jealousy and need to be in control came across so clearly, it was just really well done. And I loved how he was falling in love the whole time as well, just <3

Wookie is... kind of a whore, lol. He should know better than to get tangled up with Sungmin at all in the first place though I've no idea how he could resist... But it's definitely not as much his fault because he was kind of being dragged along.

And your style of writing is so beautiful! This was just lovely -and heartbreaking! - to read, it flowed so well! I absolutely loved it <333

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insanityplays July 31 2010, 04:07:50 UTC
8DDD <3 <3 <3 Thank you so much bb, I'm really proud of this one. It was so much fun to write, and thank you for making me feel better about it, because there were parts of it I wasn't sure flowed well or not, so I'm glad to have gotten positive feedback on that <3

Also, I FEEL SO BAD FOR MAKING WOOKIE A WHORE ;-; but idek, it kind of made sense to me that, since he is a guy, having someone throw themselves in your face like that would be kind of hard to resist.

Thank you so much for the positive feedback! <3

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