Oooooh, this was awesome! The werewolf-theme is kinda "in" these days, but this one was especially to my liking. It reads more real than most of which I've read before, and not just because Jensen wasn't some whiny bitch *eyeroll* but a strong, self-assured fighter
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*whew* Glad you're not mad. Yeah, I know what you mean with the "he", "he", "he". I kinda have the problem with Sam and Dean and it's really kinda bad to always say "brother" and attach stuff like "taller", "older", "younger"... to it. I stopped trying to vary the attributes and now I just write he and/or the name more often, trying to fit the sentence in such a way that it's clear who is meant. Dunno if that's the better way, I've had people telling me that it's hard to keep track of who's who.
Whatever. Writing is hard, and man, it would be so awesome if there was a device that wrote the story that you got in your head without bothering you to actually TYPE it, right? I've got tons of plot in my brain but I lack time and patience to put them to paper. Good thing you've got more stuff written - I just amuse myself here :-D
there's that green line under the story description where there are numbers 1 through 9 in it. that's the chapter links... but you can just start here http://insane-songbird.livejournal.com/108106.html and all the following chapters are linked in on the end of each chap. :)
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Glad you're not mad.
Yeah, I know what you mean with the "he", "he", "he". I kinda have the problem with Sam and Dean and it's really kinda bad to always say "brother" and attach stuff like "taller", "older", "younger"... to it.
I stopped trying to vary the attributes and now I just write he and/or the name more often, trying to fit the sentence in such a way that it's clear who is meant.
Dunno if that's the better way, I've had people telling me that it's hard to keep track of who's who.
Whatever. Writing is hard, and man, it would be so awesome if there was a device that wrote the story that you got in your head without bothering you to actually TYPE it, right? I've got tons of plot in my brain but I lack time and patience to put them to paper. Good thing you've got more stuff written - I just amuse myself here :-D
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http://insane-songbird.livejournal.com/108106.html
and all the following chapters are linked in on the end of each chap. :)
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