Fanfic: Yoru to Hanabi Chapter 3

[inoo_hime]

TITLE: Yoru to Hanabi
MAIN CHARACTERS: Kei Inoo, Yuto Nakajima, Kota Yabu, Yuya Takaki
DISCLAIMER: I don't own anything except for the plot
RATING: PG-13 to NC-17 just to be safe.
SUMMARY: "To forget about your first love you should find a new love.". Kei is suffering from a great heart break coz his first love, the guy he fell head over heels will

Comments

[yamajima91]

Happy Birthday~ Yutti~!!!!! XD
*and yey for the update~*

I LOVE YUTO's CHARACTER~! *and OMG~he was a perverted 6-yr old then~!*
gyaaahhh~~~they quite an interesting pair~

~will be waiting for the coming chappies~* XD

[inoo_hime]

Me too, me too. that's the reason i love writing him in this fic.^___^

he is your ichiban right? Happy birthday to him>___< i hope he will have a great day.

Inoojima is a rare pairing and for some reason i am enjoying writing themXP thanks for reading and commenting.

[yamajima91]

hai~it's Yuto ne~^^
i hope so too~

un~it is~somehow i'm into rare pairings nowadays *esp. Yuto x JUMP members* so i'm really excited about this fic~XD

[gitafeehily]

Princess Kei become a Hero.

I love Aoi,she is lovable mother.
Isn't she too young to be a mother?

Yuto innocent boy,but also a little pervert.at least he's the first guy touch Inoo's.*Why I'm being pervert right now

That boy knows how to cook and he will help you clean the apartment. it's rare to find a guy like that now.

it's so honorable you wanna help the floods victim (^ . ^)

Sorry for long comment (⌣́_⌣̀)

[inoo_hime]

Well don't worry, while writing that part that is my first impression as well lol *my mind is full of perverted things right now because of a manga i read*

don't worry about long comments. everyone loves reading this kind of comments^____^

[gitafeehily]

me too >//<.there's full of pervert things in my mind now.

Arigatou ne
I'm enthusiasm with this fic ^_^

[inoo_hime]

ikr hahaha... i noticed that too. while typing it "oh... i think Yuto's age is too young and also the way of his thinking is too mature for that age" but i end up not changing it:P. Should i change the age?

Yup since it's Yuto's birthday so i ended up with long chapters^___^

[inoo_hime]

yeah i am planning too, but if i change it then there are few things that's gonna change. If i make Yuto's age to 10 years old then the gap between Kei will only be 4 years. if that so, in the present time Yuto should be around 21 since Kei is 25 years old, which means he should be a graduating student already in his university right? If that will happen, then the scene where Aoi asked for Kei to let Yuto leave with him will change too, since the reason of his staying is because he is an incoming university student.

oh, i wonder how will i change this? *think, think, think* ^____^

[alois_trancy]

HBD YUTTIIII!!
and thanks for the update :3

pleasee update soon ;)
sankyuu

[brnyt]

Happy Birthday Yuto!! Hihi

I'm following this fic, It is so great :)
I hope You'll update soon :D

Ganbare!