Fanfic: Never to Betray You Again (Chapter 16)

[inoo_hime]

Title: Never to Betray You Again
Disclaimer: I don't own anything except the plot.
Characters: Hey Say Best, Yuto Nakajima, Keito Okamoto & Ryosuke Yamada
Genre: romance, angst, death
Rating: PG-13- NC-17, this depends on the chapter but in this chapter it is PG -13
Summary: The story focus on Kota Yabu who after 3 years meet his first love and try to

Comments

[mbee0805]

First time commenting in your fiction cause i am your stalker and i love inoobu >,< ..
yoroshiku ^^

[inoo_hime]

oh then thank you for dropping by a comment. I hope you are enjoying reading this fic until this moment. I am also a big fan of inoobu (isn't it obvious to the fic that i write?) i hope we could be great friends.

Yorishiku neXD

[yoshi_morimoto]

please! I want happy ending onegai! T.T

[inoo_hime]

do you think kota deserve to die as well? I mean he is part of the crime done 3 years ago, "the caller" is planning to kill all of them. Hehehe just saying random thoughts.

I am not sure yet of what will be the ending of this and i think there are still so many things that can happen so just look forward to it.

Thanks for reading and commenting^___^

Too many questions in my mind

[sheptana]

Oh my god, Yuya was haunted by Sakura in his dream...

>.< Kota and Kei were lover before??!! I'm happy for them..

"He stare at Kei's bed and then he stand up and stare at it again. "I know this opportunity will not come back again so.. Inoo-chan sorry..." Kota whispered and then without hesitation he jump off Kei's bed. He sniff on it and he can smell the guy's odour on his pillow and on his sheet." --> you are totally pervert, Kota... :D

"I...it's not my fault I... I just want Hikaru to come back to me." --> eh? @_@ what's going on?? Why Sakura deserved to die? I knew that Sakura and Hikaru were going out before.. Is Sakura as bitch as Tiffany?

Hikaru almost know about Kota's past. Who is next target??? still no idea who Kei father's son is...

Update, please... Onegaishimasu...

Re: Too many questions in my mind

[inoo_hime]

Am i good enough to make readers form questions in their mind? hehehe i am happy that you are into the story. Oh i also appreciate your long comments. I am really really really happy to receive one.

I thought of Kota as pervert too while writing that part. i am not sure but i think i get the idea from an anime i watch before but i can't remember what it is^___^

Don't you think that the major question now is that who is really Sakura Minato?

I think there are still lots of things going to happen in this fic so i hope you will look forward to it.

thanks for reading and commenting^____^

Re: Too many questions in my mind

[sheptana]

yeah.. i wonder who Sakura Minato is... She is the one the link all of characters this story..

Hikaru, come back to trust Kota... T.T
Don't make Kota die, please... m(_ _)m
Kei deserves to be happy with Kota... o(^o^)9

I wonder what's gonna happen next..

[len_yamada]

such a fluffy scene was interrupted by stupid caller
I'm so excited to know what's next:)

Getting Curious :o

[gitafeehily]

I think those "bad guys" setted up yabu slept with hika'girlfriend and then asked Yabu to see Sakura and Inoo get killed with exchange yabu can befriend again with Hikaru but unfortunately Hika ignored him.

Why I wanna Inoo together with Hiro?

I'll wait for next chapter ^^