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pheebs1 August 18 2008, 07:05:04 UTC
This is so interesting - the details you're building up, the descriptions of Mary, of Bobby's wife, of Dean starting to talk again. I look forward to seeing more.

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innie_darling September 27 2008, 18:13:21 UTC
Ah, thanks, sugar!

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iamthedirtgirl August 18 2008, 10:56:08 UTC
You'll have to pardon me here, but I'm trying to gather myself back together. This is all so anguished. I read this with a lump in my throat and blurry eyes that I refused to let cry. I can't go through this section by section. Each bit has some really incredible content in it and god, I feel like I've been kicked in the gut. That you're doing the whole eighteen years, I admire your dedication and honestly can't wait to get to read it cause if it's all quality like this it's going to be one of those stories that never leave you. I also expect to be stocking up on tissues and water to rehydrate when this story is finished and ready to read because no way will I be able to resist something this powerful in an extended read state.

Ahh well, I never cry for myself, I could use an excellent trigger. Like I said the other day amazing, talented, wonderful you. *loves on you a lot*

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innie_darling September 27 2008, 18:16:05 UTC
I'm really hoping to find enough time to do the story justice, because I want to know what happens next too. Thank you again so much for your encouraging words!

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deirdre_c August 18 2008, 12:08:31 UTC
Wonderful so far, m'dear!!! YAY!

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innie_darling September 27 2008, 18:16:46 UTC
Thank you!

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tabaqui August 18 2008, 14:00:52 UTC
Interesting, interesting stuff. I like it! Poor John, hanging on by a ragged thread.

I'll look forward to reading more.
:)

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innie_darling September 27 2008, 18:18:34 UTC
John is really . . . not doing well. And it hurts that he wants to pull Dean down with him because he knows he can't do it alone.

I look forward to hearing what you think about the rest - as soon as I write the rest!

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tabaqui September 27 2008, 19:58:29 UTC
There is a certain selfishness in utter despair. Oh, John...

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dotfic August 20 2008, 03:27:29 UTC
This is going to be EPIC. *g* It's off to a wonderful start and I completely forgot I was reading a snippet of a WIP, I just got into the story. I like your John pov a lot. Baby!Sam and toddler!Dean are such convincing little kids, and you broke my heart into itty bitty pieces with Bobby and Malai.

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innie_darling September 27 2008, 18:18:58 UTC
That is lovely to hear - thank you!

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