Comments | innie_darling: opening of "Generation" (SPN fic)

innie_darling

opening of "Generation" (SPN fic)

Aug 17, 2008 20:12

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supernatural, fic, in progress, supernatural_fic_my

Comments 35

gretazreta August 18 2008, 01:07:22 UTC

Holy COW. This is AWESOME.
I love how accurate and specific they all are, Dean with his corduroy trousers and Sam who will eat banana only with the promise of milk AND jam.
Eep poor John, and poor Bobby. I also really like how well you construct Mary in such a short time that we miss her, too, when she's gone.

This will DEFINITELY be worth waiting for.

innie_darling September 27 2008, 18:07:41 UTC

I'm so pleased this works for you! (I'm hoping you're still up to beta this monster when it's eventually done.)

I wish we had more fanon Mary, because I bet people could come up with all sorts of wild and wonderful ideas.

quellefromage August 18 2008, 01:23:46 UTC

Wow. This is something. I love the alternate history you've created here, and Dean's a heartbreaker all right.

18? This is gonna be a good long ride. Really looking forward to it.

innie_darling September 27 2008, 18:08:36 UTC

Dean is so wonderful, at every stage of his life!

I'm glad this piqued your interest!

musesfool August 18 2008, 01:39:02 UTC

Eep! Poor Bobby, and poor John. I loved seeing Dean come out of his silence, though, and how that kicks Sam's conversation skills into high gear.

You've got quite a lot of writing ahead of you though. You know I'm always around if you need to hash stuff out.

innie_darling September 27 2008, 18:10:55 UTC

It was fun to think of how Sammy could have become a chatterbox. And I love Malai, and wanted to write Bobby being so happy, even if it couldn't last.

I will definitely call on you if I get stuck - thanks, honey!

embroiderama August 18 2008, 01:59:41 UTC

Oh, wow! I love this--the details, the way we see their world in the moment. And I look forward to seeing what you show us about them through the years.

innie_darling September 27 2008, 18:11:23 UTC

Thank you so much!

pinkphoenix1985 August 18 2008, 05:56:10 UTC

this is just so interesting! I love how you did Bobby's wife!

I can't wait to see how the boys grow up in this AU

innie_darling September 27 2008, 18:12:53 UTC

I love her too - and I already made a very quick reference to her in another fic, because that's how firm it is in my mind that she and Bobby had some wonderful years together.

I'm waiting for time to keep writing this - and I'm excited too! Thanks!