Erosion

[inner_kyuubi]

Because KanoTema is my Sandcest OTP, and there isn't enough of it. (I'm working on the DeiTobi shower scene, I swear. XD I just had to finish this sucker first.)

Rating: PG-13ish

Summary: Temari knows why this happens between her and her brother.

Temari sort of knows why this happens between her and her brother.

Actually…that’s not entirely true.

Comments

[riza]

Beautiful. You can really feel the emotion in this piece.

*claps*

Very well done, even if you are in a slump. :)

[inner_kyuubi]

Ehehe, well thank you! I'm still not entirely pleased with it, but I'm glad the emotion came through. ♥

[melfinalupin]

*squee*
I enjoyed it! I thought it was very beautiful and shows a gentler side of the sand sibs that I can't get enough of :D ♥ ♥ ♥ I liked the flashbacks to their dad and the part about Gaara and the whole siting under the blanket with a flash light. So cute! *squee*
I hope you write more

[inner_kyuubi]

D'aww, thanks! I'm happy you enjoyed it!

Ohhh, I know. I think that's why I love KanoTema so much--there's a gentleness to their relationship that comes from the circumstances they grew up under (so I think XD), and I can't get enough of it, either. XD

You know, I think I probably will write more. ^^

[inner_kyuubi]

XD MAJOR WOOBIES.

It's good hearing from you, Chev. ♥♥♥ I'VE MISSED YOU MUCHLY. And I'm glad you liked. :D

[inner_kyuubi]

I adore him too. He's one of my favorite characters in the series. XD

WELL. That's the best compliment I could recieve, I think. *floats happily away* I'm glad it makes sense. I was hoping it would. ♥

[infinitefirefly]

Leaving him stupid little notes to find if she’s away on a mission or if he’s in a bad mood.

A;KWOF;AQOWFNJG;WEAGNH

SO. CUTE. ;_______;

Poor Kankuro. I want to kick his dad in the head for being such an asshole. And I can totally see Temari being all disdainful towards him, even as a little kid. >D

The last line was especially poignant. ♥

And did you post this at ff.net? If so, I'm totally adding it to my C2. :D

[inner_kyuubi]

:D :D :D :D

OH YAY. *squirms happily*

Their father, I'm convinced, was a complete and utter bastard who only thought of his children in terms of strength and how they could suit his needs. *gets impassioned just thinking about it* THAT STUPID FUCKER.

THANK YOU, HENNA. ♥

And yes, actually, I did. :D I wasn't going to, but I read your comment and figured, eh, what the hell? XD