Comments | inlovewithnight: Fic: "Pray For Rain" (SGA)

inlovewithnight

Fic: "Pray For Rain" (SGA)

Oct 16, 2006 09:15

I did manage to finish this last night and I suppose that means it's time to post it. ::flails:: I haven't posted fic in a month! What if I do it wrong?

Anyway. ::end flail::

For meret, whom I promised a drabble several months ago. So this is your drabble plus interest. :) And also for mona1347, who got things bouncing around in my brain with an offhand ( Read more... )

fic_2006, fic_sga

Comments 24

mezzo_cammin October 16 2006, 14:56:14 UTC

That was just ... just wonderful, in an aching, gut-punching kind of way. I loved that it was from Ronon's viewpoint. And, of course, Elizabeth's, "We left you out in the cold." just gave me chills. And yes, having Atlantis reject him would break John, because while he may not admit it, he thinks of Atlantis as 'his', doesn't he? Lovely writing, as always. Yay you!

inlovewithnight October 16 2006, 16:35:23 UTC

Thank you! :) I felt really bad taking Atlantis away from John. Originally I was thinking about doing it from his POV, or at least alternating POV, but Ronon kind of took hold and insisted, so I went with it.

viciouswishes October 16 2006, 15:06:20 UTC

Excellent and haunting. I really enjoyed your Ronon characterization and I liked the idea that the city was never fully awake and that it didn't like them.

inlovewithnight October 16 2006, 16:36:36 UTC

It obviously doesn't fit with the tone of this at all, but there's a real possible comic twist there, too...Atlantis waking up and being like "What the hell? I was napping and these people moved into my house and broke my stuff and spilled crap all over the floor? WHAT? Out! Get out NOW!"

Atlantis as Dawn Summers: "GET OUT GET OUT GET OUT!"

Er. Got a bit babbly there. Thank you. :)

viciouswishes October 16 2006, 22:06:39 UTC

That would be perhaps the funniest story ever.

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inlovewithnight October 17 2006, 03:53:55 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it (and thank you for the rec in your LJ as well).

Trying to figure out Ronon was fun. He cuts things down to the essentials because he doesn't have the time or energy to spare for complications.

I need a Ronon icon.

Thank you so much!!! :) meret October 17 2006, 00:57:33 UTC

WOW! This is gorgeous!!!! I'd forgotten all about the drabble thing, but I'm so glad you didn't! Wonderful characterization! *Brilliant* writing! I love it! :)

Re: Thank you so much!!! :) inlovewithnight October 17 2006, 03:54:11 UTC

Yay! I'm glad you liked it! :) Thank you!

livrelibre October 19 2006, 02:57:33 UTC

Lovely and haunting.

inlovewithnight October 21 2006, 18:16:49 UTC

Thank you!