Sheppard gen.
Title from "Born in the USA."
Operates on the assumption that Shep has Joe Flanigan's birthdate. And that said birthdate as given by IMDB is correct. (1967, for those playing along at home.)
Just some toying about with backstory. Thanks to
poisontaster for the beta-read; since I was too lazy to send it back for a second readthrough, all
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I love the way you got the disconnect without making anything bad. Sad, but not mean. Just... not right, and therefore right here.
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Sometimes I think John still feels that way, even in Atlantis -- he does things because he's supposed to, because that's how the theory is supposed to be born out, not always because it's what he wants or needs to do. Sometimes, anyway.
And like Abby said -- excellent job of making the characters bleak and empty without being mean or abusive. None of them are bad, the antagonist -- they just aren't right, either. Lovely.
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I like the line about friends and family in theory, that really works.
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Thanks for reading and commenting. :)
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I love the fact that you put John in a situation that isn't abusive. He just wants out. He wants to belong somewhere and he knows it isn't where he is right then.
You even fit in just how smart he is too. Good for you. Shep is just one big ball of insecurities and hopefullness in this fic. I think that's why he's a little clueless sometimes on Atlantis about what to do when people actually care.
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