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Fic: Puzzling Evidence (Part XXI), NC-17, Lorne/Zelenka by inkscribe

Jan 10, 2007 08:00

Title: Puzzling Evidence (Part XXI)
Author: inkscribe
Pairings: Lorne/Zelenka
Kink: mild D/s, bondage, spanking
Warnings: This story has angst. Really! See angst-o-meter for chapter rating.
Angst-o-meter: giga-angst (very strong)
Rating: NC-17
Words: ~1700 (this part)
Spoilers: none(this part)
Locations: atlantiskink, welovezelenka, slashing_lorne, my LJ
Feedback: yes, please!

Summary: What we ( Read more... )

mckay, angst, sga, sheppard, zelenka, emmagan, beckett, kink, d/s, puzzling evidence, lorne, bdsm

Comments 39

audreyscastle January 10 2007, 15:21:45 UTC

Oooh, you tease! Now we gotta find out what Rodney's hiding, too! Secrets, secrets.....

darkmuadib January 11 2007, 00:00:49 UTC

I would imagine it is that rope he found in the previous chapter.

inkscribe January 11 2007, 00:07:35 UTC

Shhhhhh, Gay!Sex!Beta ... we don't want to give anything away about the thing, or the other thing, or that thing, either. :-D

darkmuadib January 11 2007, 00:16:23 UTC

OOOPS! Well as the poster further down suggested, it might be the bundle of stuff found in his room. So I wasn't really spoiling. And don't get me involved in this! I know nothing! if people think I know something, I know there will be a mob after me with pitchforks and torches. And somehow I think, you don't even know everything!

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inkscribe January 11 2007, 00:08:46 UTC

Thank you! I wish we saw more of her insights in the show -- I suspect she could be a person of great depth. Just. Not. Yet. ;-)

fishbaum January 10 2007, 19:28:55 UTC

Yippee!! Here I was, proud of myself for surviving a day without a new chapter, and here one is!! :)

Great to see Teyla's insights. (Would love to see her and Elizabeth help support each other... if ya know what I mean! ;) )

Good to see perhaps something more on Radek's past, and possibly something to force him to resolve it. It'll be hard, but at least maybe it will be over afterwards.

And I wonder when John is gonna realize what Rodney and some others think of him & Carson's relationship. :)

And of course, the $50,000 question -- what is Rodney keeping, and what will John make of it??? :)

Another great chapter!!

inkscribe January 11 2007, 00:10:48 UTC

I'm not certain I'm up to writing hot girl-on-girl action -- I've already had to figure out one set of paired anatomical choreography for this fic, LOL!

Hey -- if I know the answer to your question, does that mean I get $50,000? *blinking innocently in your general direction* *g*

ankhmutes January 10 2007, 19:40:16 UTC

I'm thinking that what Rodney doesn't want to show John is the bundle of stuff he took from Carson's room.

I want to know about Radek's past, to know what makes the poor dear so traumatized, so that Marc can help him past it.

I want *someone* to help Carson out, to give him the love and affection he craves.

I'd dealy love to see Ronen pin Rodney against the wall and kiss the crap out of him... wait, did I say that out loud?

Angie

inkscribe January 11 2007, 00:15:03 UTC

Well, Radek's past is coming ... but not quickly. It's a very, very hard part to write. I spent most of yesterday a bit shocky from the experience, and that part is far from done yet. But all will be revealed, eventually.

We'll have to get there when we get there. ;-)

Did I hear a lone voice, ringing loudly in the wilderness, going for some Rodney/Ronon? Eh? Eh? ;-)

almightychrissy January 10 2007, 20:00:06 UTC

Ooooo John! Come on, get him to talk!!!!!!

Oh man, Radek :( That poor, poor man. So much undeserved pain.

inkscribe January 11 2007, 00:16:18 UTC

Heh heh ... John can be scarily good at interrogations. However, I shudder to think what Elizabeth would do if she caught him interrogating Rodney. ;-)