Fic: Puzzling Evidence (Part XXVIII), NC-17, Lorne/Zelenka by inkscribe

[inkscribe]

Title: Puzzling Evidence (Part XXVIII)
Author: inkscribe
Pairings: Lorne/Zelenka
Kink: mild D/s, bondage, spanking
Warnings: Graphic smut be found here! (Although, since you were hoping for that, I suppose I really shouldn’t warn you about the smuttage in this chapter. ;-) )
Promises: No pre-Sunday canon characters are permanently harmed in the making of

Comments

Puzzling Evidence XXVIII

[slashpuppy]

Great chapter!

My heart's aching for John, who has just acknowledged some repressed truths.
*pets John*

Yay Lorne for trying to get Carson to admit that he should have talked to *his* friends about the loneliness that led to his accident.

Yay Radek for making a move on Lorne! :-)

'inchoate rage' ummm 'inchoate' ... one of my favourite words!

Minor comment:
'He never came on this mission' might be better as 'He hadn't come on this mission'

Re: Puzzling Evidence XXVIII

[inkscribe]

*g* I'm glad you liked it! Inchoate is also one of my favourite words, too! Woo hoo!

[pushkin666]

Well, I'm not sure who I feel sorrier for in this episode - John or Marc. I know I should be feeling sorry for Radek and Carson, but Radek has had my angst of pity for the moment (don't worry it will be back), and Carson's I'm sure is yet to come *g*.

I do feel awful for Marc, feeling bad about the fact that Radek didn't think he could trust him. Radek has some work cut out there for him I feel.

And you bad bad person, poor John. What are you doing to him?

[inkscribe]

Now now, that would be telling. *g*

But you're right, Radek has some work ahead of him.

[miso_no_tsuki]

Wonderful! Instead of stopping in half-angst, now you stop half way through the action.
tease! Bad, bad Inky!
They're really all in a mess aren't they? Please be nice to Carson next and let him get some. *puppy eyes*
You can let John and Rodney suffer a bit longer!
Hee!

[inkscribe]

Heh heh heh. Well, I am a Padawan of Evil, so I think it probably goes with my duties. ;-)

Carson will find some happiness. Perhaps. Maybe. Possibly. ;-) (Heh heh ... oooh, it is rather fun already knowing where that part is going to go!)

WooHoo!

[ankhmutes]

Well, this has certainly perked me up! Feel better already.

Lessee, nice to see Radek less passive about sex, taking over for a change. Is he going to move too far to the other end of the spectrum? Is it possible that he will be lashing out, punishing for what he went through, even though Marc isn't the one responsible? And would Marc allow him to do that? Twisty. Perhaps I am overthinking it.

Rodney. Carson. John. Carson. Rodney/John/Carson?? Tease.

Can't wait for more, as usual!

Re: WooHoo!

[darkmuadib]

hehe...I am actually rooting for a john/rodney/carson actually that way nobody of the 3 is left out and feel lonely etc... and more the merrier I always say... although dunno if it will be in the deck of cards, since inkscribe loves to torture her characters, so to say... :P

Re: WooHoo!

[inkscribe]

Hee hee! And sadly, despite being such a good beta to me, I haven't told you, have I? Heh heh heh. (My little secret is safe for the time being). *g*

Re: WooHoo!

[inkscribe]

Hmmm. Well, I'll pose a question to you in turn: is it possible to over-think this fic?

;-)

I'm reasonably confident that I've kept this story about as straight-line as Rodney keeps a jumper in flight. *g* But perhaps I am more obvious than I realise. Heh heh heh.

[audreyscastle]

Awww.... Nice to see Radek being a little more forward.... :) And poor Marc, trying to cope. :-D

[inkscribe]

I definitely feel for Marc too, here. And apparently, so is Radek ... ;-) *g*