Fic: Puzzling Evidence (Part XXIV), NC-17, Lorne/Zelenka by inkscribe

[inkscribe]

Title: Puzzling Evidence (Part XXIV)
Author: inkscribe
Pairings: Lorne/Zelenka
Kink: mild D/s, bondage, spanking
Warnings: Consider obtaining a Czech-English dictionary. ;-)
Promises: No pre-Sunday canon characters are permanently harmed in the making of this fic. EVER.
Angst-o-meter: kilo-angst (strong)
Rating: NC-17
Words: ~2900 (this part)
Spoilers: none

Comments

[miso_no_tsuki]

Ahhh. Now we're getting to it.Lovely chapter and yes, so much better with the Czech in properly.
(Don't suppose you could let me know how to do that? The Czech in my stories is always without diacriticals because when I tried to put them in html they come out as greek swearwords-literally I get greek letters!)
Dekuji velice moc!

[inkscribe]

I'm happy to try to give you a hand. Drop me a note at the username above, at our good friends at gmail dot com. :-)

Puzzling Evidence XXIV

[slashpuppy]

Good chapter. I'm glad that Carson *finally* told some of his friends the truth.

I'm also glad that Radek is finally, finally, talking through his trauma. I'm getting some seriously unsettling vibes from Radek though. One of those, 'Radek, what did you *do*?' vibes. I thought that something terrible had happened *to* Radek, now I'm a trifle worried that *he* did something he finds unforgivable. Hence the line:
Radek understood that he needed to tell, needed to explain, needed to hope that Marc could listen and hear, and hope that he may yet possibly still want Radek after it was all over, even once he understood.

Fingers crossed hoping Radek didn't betray his lover to the KSC!

Re: Puzzling Evidence XXIV

[inkscribe]

Oooh ... well, "they" have told me that I am not allowed to say anything further at this time. Sorry.

'-)

I'm glad you liked the chapter. :-) Děkuji!

[starrylizard]

*sputters and whines* I want the sekrit! Sorry I'm tired... *coughs*

Still good. Too tired to make a real comment. Beckett finally told Radek and Lorne. But what does Lorne think of Carson's little habits? Do we get to find out?

Good night! *yawns*

[inkscribe]

*tucking you in for a good sleep*

*whispering in your dreams* Patience, Padawan. All will be revealed.

:-D

[audreyscastle]

*eagerly awaits more*

[inkscribe]

*hopefully by the end of the weekend* :-)

[almightychrissy]

Very glad that Carson has spilled. It's good for him.

Oh Radek :( He needs to talk too, get out some of the poison that's been killing him.

[inkscribe]

Yes ... poor guys. :-( They're really hurting here. I'm glad Marc is with them. :-)