Fic: Puzzling Evidence (Part XXIV), NC-17, Lorne/Zelenka by inkscribe

[inkscribe]

Title: Puzzling Evidence (Part XXIV)
Author: inkscribe
Pairings: Lorne/Zelenka
Kink: mild D/s, bondage, spanking
Warnings: Consider obtaining a Czech-English dictionary. ;-)
Promises: No pre-Sunday canon characters are permanently harmed in the making of this fic. EVER.
Angst-o-meter: kilo-angst (strong)
Rating: NC-17
Words: ~2900 (this part)
Spoilers: none

Comments

[elmyraemilie]

An exchange between them, pain for pain--though perhaps Radek holds more of that currency than Carson. I hope Radek can take heart at Carson's bravery in confiding his truth to Radek and Marc.

If this is going where I think it's going, it's going to be very hard to witness, even in print. Poor babies.

And can I say, after reading what I've read about "Sunday," how good it is to "see" Carson? I'm firmly in the Clan Denial, here.

[inkscribe]

Well, I finally got to see the ep, and even after viewing it twice I'm left pretty much gobsmacked at the [insert nonsensical and futile adjective here] of it all. I might get around to collating my notes for my "best parts" version eventually, but probably not for a few days yet. Let's just say that my version is a whole lot less plot-holey. ;-) But it still works with the visuals. ;-)

And yes, I must warn you -- have tissues handy. Things get much worse pretty much immediately. Waaaaaaaahhhhhhh! :-(

[fishbaum]

Is it shallow of me to want to slap the chickie-poo on the planet for lusting after Lorne? ;)

Am very glad to see Carson told his secret -- and I'm looking forward to more of the guys' reaction to it. But apparently it went well enough, as Carson seems pretty okay later in the day.

Am intrigued by Radek's tale, looking forward to the rest of it!

[inkscribe]

Hee! No, not shallow at all. I was surprised as the next person when some het-yearnings crept into this fic. However, my Gay!Sex!Beta darkmuadib assures me that heterosexual feelings are perfectly normal.

:-D

[pushkin666]

Nice to see that it's starting to come out, both for Radek and for Carson. I'm interested to see what actually happens when Caldwell appears, and John is definitely having a midlife crisis. He needs to start focusing - and I don't mean on Rodney's hands *g*.

I'm looking forward and I'm not looking forward to the next parts - if you know what I mean.

[inkscribe]

I know exactly what you mean. I've had a few days to come to terms with all of it, as I finished developing the entire confession two weeks ago, and Icie and I finished tweaking the language/translation issues a little over one week ago.

On the one hand, I'm very pleased with the scene(s). On the other -- they make me very sad. :-( Waaaaa!

And yeah, John is a little, erm, distracted, isn't he? Hee hee. ;-)

[pushkin666]

I'm also curious as to how Carson first started with his little kink shall we say. I wonder how many times he's actually needed to do this.

Yes, John is distracted. As long as you don't have him lusting after Caldwell that will be fine *g*

[inkscribe]

Hmmmm ... John and Steven ... *considers the idea, then rejects it* ... nope. Let's not go there. ;-)