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Sayuki Gaiden: Stories

Sep 01, 2008 22:50

Title: Stories
Rating: G
Word Count: 289
Characters: Goku, Kenren, Tenpou, Konzen
Notes: So I kinda went crazy during my enforced internet abstinence (which is, THANK GOD, completely over as far as I can tell) and typed up all the stuff from my notebooks. Going back the grand distance of last January. Uh. Yes. This was the only thing I thought was ( Read more... )

saiyuki, saiyuki: tenpou, saiyuki: goku, saiyuki: kenren, saiyuki gaiden, saiyuki: konzen

Comments 14

sarah_serinde September 17 2008, 03:42:35 UTC

So very adorable. I love the way Goku is naive, but not completely oblivious. He really can be quite observant, even if he doesn't quite understand what's going on. ^^
And I too love the last lines, they definitely work well. He's just so sweet, and determined, and...~<3
I also love the dynamics that are hinted at between the other three, just little glimpses of their characters and relationships, seen through Goku's eyes. Great fic! ^^

not_cynical September 18 2008, 10:08:27 UTC

Thank you so much for the lovely comment! I really appreciate it and I'm glad you liked the fic - and that you think the dynamics worked, I was worried I might be a little off with them. :D

ginnyvos September 17 2008, 10:46:40 UTC

That's... So very sweet. Lovely. Absolutely lovely. *adds to memories*

not_cynical September 18 2008, 10:06:44 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! *blushes*