Sayuki Gaiden: Stories

[not_cynical]

Title: Stories
Rating: G
Word Count: 289
Characters: Goku, Kenren, Tenpou, Konzen
Notes: So I kinda went crazy during my enforced internet abstinence (which is, THANK GOD, completely over as far as I can tell) and typed up all the stuff from my notebooks. Going back the grand distance of last January. Uh. Yes. This was the only thing I thought was

Comments

[radarsparks]

oh man you wrote gaiden fic

♥_♥ ♥_♥ ♥_♥

ILU

[not_cynical]

ILU too for being awesome and giving me scans of Gaiden. :* :* :*

[radarsparks]

okay, i'm gonna be Serious now. pfffff.

i love this little fic. old susan fic is old but still awesome. ;; the last line is really wow, and this line is also excellent: They usually come back smelling of fire or salt - the sea, Ten-chan says when Goku asks him, water as far as the eye can see - and blood.)

really, i love it all, though. 8D

i think you meant he's really telling, not he's really tell, though. ;D

[not_cynical]

Serious!Stormie is also an awesome Stormie! :* :* :*

Thank you Stormie! I am really really really REALLY glad you like it! I think I may have been writing it For You. I don't know why I think that, but I'm sure I've owed you Saiyuki fic with Goku in since the beginning of time? And I'm glad you like the last line because that was a 100% last minute addition and I wasn't sure it worked. :) Thanks Stormie-lady!

I do indeed! Thanks for spotting that - I read through this about eight times and completely missed it. ;)

[thebaconfat]

kdlkf. Fabulous. The Goku-voice here is so great, and I love how much is said without saying that much, and there's all these little bits, and the emphasis on food! <3 It fit the series really, really well.

when he repeats them to Konzen to ask him what they mean, Konzen washes his mouth out with soap.

XD Heee.

And what this bit says about the lower world and the whole -- akljsk -- the whole thing the series is about:

the sea, Ten-chan says when Goku asks him, water as far as the eye can see - and blood.)

Signing forms and being a grumpy bastard! And the last line. ♥ I love these guys so much.

[not_cynical]

askfjhasfh Thank you Baco! I'm really really happy you liked it and you think it fits - Gaiden fic is a little bit easier to write than proper-Saiyuki fic, but it's still. Difficult? And and and. I THINK what I'm trying to say is I am relieved you think it's okay! And I'm happy you liked the last line because it was really a last-minute thing because the way I had it ending before didn't feel like enough to me, so. Happy you think it works! :D

[sharpeslass]

Lovely, sweet and full of "true." Really excellent. *hugs author*

[not_cynical]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) *hugs reader*

[orehime]

OOhh nice :) Look forward to seeing what else you had stored up!

[not_cynical]

Thank you! And I have a LOT to post so hopefully there'll be something else you'll like. :D