Imperfect Choreography

Jan 03, 2012 22:45

Title: Imperfect Choreography ( Read more... )

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meshjumpsuit February 12 2012, 06:26:02 UTC
I usually don't comment on fics and just creepily read and disappear, but I couldn't help it with this one.
First off, I wanted to say I love love love you. It's so rare to see HanChul fanfiction now, especially ones that aren't full on angst. The fact that you combined the fluff and slight angst with a happy ending just makes me want to buy you a Loui Vuitton bag full of kittens and cookies.
I almost cried a little. This fic was so true to their actual personalities that it made it seem like something that couldv'e happened. The way Heechul at first wrote him off because of his bad Korean but slowly became more comfortable and began to love him ; A ; I got emotionally invested in this small fic. Stupid Hangeng for not noticing his feelings sooner! xD At least in the ending they got together and it was absolutely perfect.
So just saying, this was amazing, I loved it, and I'm going to creep on the rest of your fics ; 3 ; <3 /found new fave fic writer/

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ink_river10 February 12 2012, 14:06:14 UTC
Awww this comment made me blush! Thank you so very much! I'm grateful when I get comments like this, because it makes me feel like I have done a good job as a writer. So, thank you for taking the time to tell me how much you liked it, and for adding me to your "read" list. I appreciate it and I hope you like my other fics too. :)

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nije1vazno February 24 2012, 14:40:40 UTC
So, so, SO romantic. x33333 Ah, I love romance so much. You described everything so perfectly. I personally really loved the remote control scene. Poor Hankyung, feeling so lonely in a foreign country, but he forced himself to stay strong and learn something from the painful experience. He's so mature. I love that gorgeous boy. <3

And Heechul. His cold mask melting down when he's around Hannie. x3 That must be love. (No shit, genius.) The last scene literally made me "Awwww~" They're so perfect for each other! HanChul would be my OTP if all authors were like you. I hate how everyone portrays Heechul as a perverted, cold, arrogant bitch. Why can't they all write like you... T.T

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ink_river10 February 24 2012, 23:30:22 UTC
Heechul can appear to be a cold, arrogant bitch but I see through that mask. I can tell from the few tiny things he has said and others have said about him that he's a really lonely, easily hurt, fiercely protective person. I love him so very much - there aren't enough words to convey how much I love Kim Heechul.

Thank you again for writing this comment. This fic was a work of love for me. :)

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nije1vazno February 25 2012, 15:15:10 UTC
Well, when I said "bitch", I meant a mean female person. I agree that Heechul looks feminine, but I don't think that he acts feminine. He's anything but graceful and feminine. xDD But, yeah, I agree with you, he comes off as blunt, I don't really think he appears arrogant, that's a negative trait, but he's confident. Cold... Well, yeah, I agree there. But deep inside, he's not cold, but as you said, protective and fragile. I know how you feel, I adore him so much.

No problem. ^^ I understand why you would say that, it's really incredible.

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shinnyluvssuju May 14 2012, 22:48:28 UTC
This was just so fantastically adorably amazing!

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colorful_ice September 14 2012, 20:28:04 UTC
omg omg thank you for not braking heechul's heart :)

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ftino1 February 19 2013, 08:41:05 UTC
I had read this before but I don't know if I commented already but who cares, I will do so again TT^TT you know, this are my favorite type of HanChul because it really does make me wonder how they felt when they met, how Hangeng felt with Heechuls never ending support, what made Heechul love Hangeng as a friend so much and stuff like that TTwTT IT's really pretty written

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