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suimin_jikanFrom: Your Secret Santa
Title: Vanilla
Pairing/Focus: Myungsoo/Sungyeol
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 6469
Summary: Sungyeol learns too much things from what a teacher can teach.
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Sungyeol twirls a pen between his fingers and listens to the teacher drone on and on. )
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i absolutely loved how you incorporated the theme sungyeol was given for his assignment into the fic - the story gave off a dangerous, edgy, playing with fire feel that really kind of made the reader see this from sungyeol's point of view and take in the inflding of events as he would. i really like how you included the lyrics too (tbh it took me so long to figure out they were from you and lol ;;;;;), and the natural way it came to sungyeol only adds to how much this danger he first hesitated to accept has changed him as a whole ( ... )
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thank you so so so so so so so much ;~~~~;
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keep on writing dear! <3
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i could've done more with the background i know;;
but really, thank you bb ♥
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