ISS 2011: FOR SUIMIN_JIKAN

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To: suimin_jikan
From: Your Secret Santa

Title: Vanilla
Pairing/Focus: Myungsoo/Sungyeol
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 6469
Summary: Sungyeol learns too much things from what a teacher can teach.

Comments

[sunlit]

AGWUWBKEJSIESSHEDBSJSKAB NAUGHTY PROFESSOR KIM MYUNGSOO HURHURHUR

i absolutely loved how you incorporated the theme sungyeol was given for his assignment into the fic - the story gave off a dangerous, edgy, playing with fire feel that really kind of made the reader see this from sungyeol's point of view and take in the inflding of events as he would. i really like how you included the lyrics too (tbh it took me so long to figure out they were from you and lol ;;;;;), and the natural way it came to sungyeol only adds to how much this danger he first hesitated to accept has changed him as a whole.

i find it intriguing how you blurrd the lines between myungsoo and sungyeol from the very beginning - there was minimal student/teacher interaction, and although that could do with a little elaboration, i liked it c: again, i think you wrote danger very well in their relationship; how it was originally only supposed to last for as long as sungyeol's project did, the fragility of it and the consequences if anyone found out.

there really isn't much to criticize tbh and i liked this a lot! *u* i would've liked a bit of character development on myungsoo's end and maybe a tiny backstory as to why myungsoo agreed to coach only sungyeol in more detail, but otherwise, this was written wonderfully - don't let anyone else tell you otherwise, okay! :')

DEJECTED NIEL IS WIN BTW

[sohye_x3ctmh]

you know exactly how i feel right bb? :')
thank you so so so so so so so much ;~~~~;

[sunlit]

hehe i think i do! :') ♥ don't mention it, bb; ilyyyyy~~~~