I tried to be poetic in the first line (although it needs work). Then I just didn't care anymore and wanted to describe everything - turned out okay and rambly. And I love rambliness and okayness.:D Perhaps not okayness but ramblinss I do - and I'm sad to say (or perhaps not) that I'm still rambling, and I should shut my mouth up now.
I think the rambliness made the place sound beautiful. High-five.
And I think the answer to your "I don't know" is poetry. It's amazing how it compresses your writing, stimulates your senses and opens them to the world. Makes you notice things, both in the human condition as well as nature's.
Heeee. It was almost a fairytale - almost a paper dragged out off one of the books to deities. V. beautiful place - yes - and I forgot to mention that the mountains, while high - were round and not edgy at the top, worn and shaped for thousand of years (first because the ice melted thousand of years ago, then because of the cold weather mingled with northern winds mixed with southern).
Deathly Hallows = too much thoughts to bother writing down at the moment. I have - I think - some interesting analyses that are beyond the common, but I need time (the essay will probably be huge).
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How you can describe these things with artless excellence, I don't know [there goes the incredible author in you]. But the place sounds beautiful.
-Debbie
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I tried to be poetic in the first line (although it needs work). Then I just didn't care anymore and wanted to describe everything - turned out okay and rambly. And I love rambliness and okayness.:D Perhaps not okayness but ramblinss I do - and I'm sad to say (or perhaps not) that I'm still rambling, and I should shut my mouth up now.
I think the rambliness made the place sound beautiful. High-five.
And I think the answer to your "I don't know" is poetry. It's amazing how it compresses your writing, stimulates your senses and opens them to the world. Makes you notice things, both in the human condition as well as nature's.
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Can't wait till part two. *hugs*
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*returns with a squish*
Thank ya. Um - Part two is on its way, but I don't know how much attention I'll give it (more happened, more difficult to explain . . .).
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Your descriptions are so transporting, too, as though the journal was with you along on your rambles. =) Same sense of unfolding impressions.
p.s. Welcome back and I'm looking forward to hearing your impressions of Deathly Hallows! =)
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Deathly Hallows = too much thoughts to bother writing down at the moment. I have - I think - some interesting analyses that are beyond the common, but I need time (the essay will probably be huge).
Oi *huggles* - you mentioned rambles.
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