Fic: Fog and Embers (Harry/Ginny)

[inell]

Title: Fog and Embers
Pairing: Harry/Ginny
Rating: Any Age
Summary: In the end, there is fog and embers
Word Count: 1030
Beta: florahart
ABC Challenge: Alive for swoosh09

Comments

[deeppoet117]

Good read; thanks for sharing.

[inell]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[idea_of_sarcasm]

Lovely inell. Just....lovely.

[inell]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. ♥

[jcrowell]

Wow, This is great, really emotional!

"Her hair is wild around her face, which is slick with sweat and covered with dirt and a streak of blood across her forehead from a deep cut. There’s a bad burn on her left forearm, visible through charred robes, but she either doesn’t notice or doesn’t care. For a moment, Ginny is taken aback, feeling as if she’s looking at a warrior Goddess out of one of her father’s Muggle mythology books, but then Hermione looks at her, and she sees the fear and worry as she again asks about Ron. A warrior, yes, but she’s also human, like the rest of them."

I love this paragraph, it is one of the best descriptions of the end of the war that I've read!

[inell]

Thank you! That paragraph was a favorite, so I'm glad it stood out for you!

[winkingannie]

Wow, Inell, what a powerful piece. Thanks for sharing it. :)

[inell]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[emeraldstag]

Very descriptive, great imagery!

[inell]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! *grin*