inception fic: lives i've pursued (1/1)

[indysaur]

Lives I've Pursued
Inception: Arthur/Eames
Rating: PG13
7,551 words
Arthur could live like this, or this.
Unbeta-ed which will become extremely obvious during the reading of, I'm betting.

Comments

[park_hye_in]

utterly gorgeous. your writing is just fantastic.

[indysaur]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for your kindness.

[epistolic]

Oh, everything about this is so quiet, so gentle and so insightful; Arthur in the pool, everything - God, this was so perfect. One of the best fics I've read in this fandom hands down, I can't even. So well-constructed, the pacing was perfect and the way you allowed each character to just slowly develop into themselves without any unnecessary drama - brilliant. Thank-you for sharing something so lovely, bb. ♥

[indysaur]

Ah, incredibly incredibly generous, and more than I deserve. I'm so glad this worked for you, that the pacing worked--I worry about that a lot, it's true!--and I'm so happy that the character development felt organic and believable. Thank you so much for reading, and for your kindness! I so, so appreciate it.

[lilylines]

God, this is just ... stunning. I'm having a hard time articulating just how beautiful this all is to me. lol. Everything feels so delicately crafted and just lovely, almost dreamy. I love that Arthur is kind of lost, floating through life, and the way you show just glimpses of his and Eames' past relationship, building it up into the present. And really, that last section is just gorgeous.

*contented sigh* : DD

[indysaur]

I'm so glad you liked the end! And, you know, the middle junk, too. Hahaha, seriously, though, I'm really happy to hear that the glimpses of their past relationship didn't feel too...extraneous, that they felt locked into the story, you know? Er. I don't know if you actually said, that, but, sigh I'm just talking now. I'm sorry! But I'm really grateful for your time and for the fact that you read this. Thank you! :D

[indysaur]

I'm so glad you liked Brady and Saito! I like Saito, too. I'm glad that the meandering felt a little purposeful, too. Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words!

[glam_geek]

I love this story so much. ♥

[indysaur]

I'm so glad to hear that. Hahaha, I think it might be the fact that I'm operating on, like, four hours of sleep right now, but I am feeling SUPER mushy, and I'm really happy for this fandom and readers like you. ♥