inception fic: lives i've pursued (1/1)

Oct 31, 2010 16:24

Lives I've Pursued
Inception: Arthur/Eames
Rating: PG13
7,551 words
Arthur could live like this, or this.
Unbeta-ed which will become extremely obvious during the reading of, I'm betting.

The job on which he first met Eames ended poorly. )

fic, inception

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indysaur November 1 2010, 01:53:32 UTC
I'm sorry that RL is not running smoothly! I hope that things even out soon.

I'm really happy that you got a chance to read this, though and that you liked it! Hahaha, I get antsy about OCs, I know they can be annoying sometimes, but I'm glad they worked for you here.

Haha, thanks so much for reading. <3

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cobweb_diamond November 1 2010, 00:57:51 UTC
"Do you start your day with a healthy breakfast?" <--- you made cobb into a human who makes jokes! and i love you for this.

and the apple! arthur taking people out and eating apple! i love it. this whole thing was so well-written and slow, i enjoyed the hell out of it. :DDD

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indysaur November 1 2010, 01:55:49 UTC
HAHA, COBB. BEST. My favorite characterization of him is when he's a SUPER DOUCHE, but I think he probably actually has a decent sense of humor when not, you know, tormented by visions of his wife.

LOL, uhhh, the apple bit is probably a purely action-porny detail, but I couldn't help myself. I'm so glad you enjoyed this! Thank you for taking the time out to read it.

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dejablue7 November 1 2010, 01:33:49 UTC
This is very beautiful. It leaves me with a quiet, soft feeling inside.
Reading this also made me miss living in CA. You have such a wonderful feeling for that setting in this fic, and Brady's character is so charming, as is Mackenzie.

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indysaur November 1 2010, 01:58:41 UTC
Ah, where do you live now?? Uh. SORRY, you don't have to answer that. I am NOT A STALKER, PROMISE. Setting is super important, I think, and I live in California, so a ton of that comes from all that junk. I settle for familiarity if I can, so a ton of my fic is set in CA whether it merits it or not. That is probably not the best thing to admit.

I'm so glad you enjoyed this, and the OCs! That is great to hear. Thank you so much.

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byandby November 1 2010, 01:34:46 UTC
Just lovely. I feel warm and dreamy now.

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indysaur November 1 2010, 01:59:09 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it! Warm and dreamy are good things for winter days. Thank you so much.

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ex_sasukich November 1 2010, 01:37:57 UTC
oh brady <3 and saito! i like how arthur just slips in and out of their lives so quietly, so quintessentially arthur ^^ and how much it surprises and delights eames to find him there...

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indysaur November 1 2010, 02:01:21 UTC
HAHA, BRADY. Sigh. I'm really happy you liked Saito here! He's an interesting character!

Thank you so much for reading this, and I'm really glad that Arthur's movements worked for you. Thank you again!

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