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Aug 18, 2007 00:40

Characters: Claude/Nathan; implicit Claude/Peter and Nathan/Peter, sorta ( Read more... )

nathan, heroes_fic, heroes, one_offs, heroes_slash, claude, angst, rare_heroes, fic

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c_quinn August 17 2007, 23:58:57 UTC
And that thought feels very much like betrayal.

Perfect line there.

Excellent piece; loved the build-up.

I'm curious: will there be a sequel? One with Peter returning and dealing with his lover and his brother's admitedly strained relationship? Yes? Please?

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indyhat August 18 2007, 00:06:08 UTC
Perfect line there.

Oh good; wasn't sure if I was the only one to see that in what was happening.

Thank you - glad you liked! It's been niggling at me, this piece, for a couple of weeks.

I'm curious: will there be a sequel? One with Peter returning and dealing with his lover and his brother's admitedly strained relationship? Yes? Please?

See that tag, up at the top, that says one_offs? Yes, that one! ;P

Seriously, I seem to be really bad at writing sequels (remember Grounded? Yeah, I never wrote a sequel) so I don't want to commit to it, because right now I don't have it in me, and I don't know when I'll get my mojo for it back.

If it helps, I also have another, unconnected Claude/Nathan piece on the go. It seems to be where I'm at right now!

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c_quinn August 18 2007, 00:12:10 UTC
See that tag, up at the top, that says one_offs? Yes, that one! ;P

I ignore your silly tags.

If it helps, I also have another, unconnected Claude/Nathan piece on the go.

That doesn't really help. [laugh] I was hoping for a Peter/Claude/Nathan slash fest of joy. ;)

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indyhat August 18 2007, 00:28:14 UTC
I ignore your silly tags.

But this was one of my sensible ones!

That doesn't really help. [laugh] I was hoping for a Peter/Claude/Nathan slash fest of joy. ;)

Huh. Hee. Well, I'll certainly give that some consideration. (How would that even ... oh my.)

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veetvoojagig August 18 2007, 00:13:20 UTC
Duuuuuude. That was... fuck. Very, very powerful play of emotions. Loved it.

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indyhat August 18 2007, 00:34:31 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad it worked for you and the power of it wasn't limited to the inside of my own head ;)

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veetvoojagig August 18 2007, 00:36:00 UTC
Oh, no, the power was very prevalent. *Grins*

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betterthanlegos August 18 2007, 00:15:14 UTC
Well that was different.

But I really liked it.

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indyhat August 18 2007, 00:34:52 UTC
Thank you! Glad you did :)

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airspaniel August 18 2007, 01:46:53 UTC
...no acknowledgment that this might be about two people.

Which is fair, since it isn't.

Just one.

I completely teared up at that. Which was unexpected, really the whole thing was unexpected, but I loved it. ^_^ Great job!

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indyhat August 18 2007, 07:23:44 UTC
Thank you! I'm surprised that was an emotional hook (that particular part wasn't for me, writing it), but really pleased that it made an impact. Glad you liked :)

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gingerberrysnap August 18 2007, 02:33:33 UTC
Yes, you wrote Claude/Nathan! This was wonderful.

Your Claude voice was spot-on as always. And I really loved how detached the sex was, how they still didn't really like each other, but there's always that tenuous connection of Peter keeping them together.

I feel your pain on getting jossed, btw. Regeneration is going down so hard. *laughs* Oh well.

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indyhat August 18 2007, 07:25:46 UTC
Thank you! I'm really pleased you liked it :) And I'm glad if the detached sex worked, because ... well, y'know, usually when one writes a sex-scene, it's about chemistry. And this really, really wasn't!

Thanks :)

And don't worry about Regeneration! I'm still dying to know where you're taking it, and Heroes was made for AU. More soon?

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gingerberrysnap August 18 2007, 13:41:26 UTC
And I'm glad if the detached sex worked, because ... well, y'know, usually when one writes a sex-scene, it's about chemistry. And this really, really wasn't!

I think it would be really interesting to see what happens if Peter gets back and what his reaction would be. But I don't think this would necessarily benefit from a sequel so I'll imagine it myself. *g*

nd don't worry about Regeneration! I'm still dying to know where you're taking it, and Heroes was made for AU. More soon?

Thanks! And hopefully. I wanted to have the next chapter up before I left for NY but I was concentrating on finishing the strawberry porn. I'm back to work now, but I am trying to write whenever I can, so hopefully within a week.

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indyhat August 18 2007, 15:02:01 UTC
I think it would be really interesting to see what happens if Peter gets back and what his reaction would be. But I don't think this would necessarily benefit from a sequel so I'll imagine it myself. *g*

Very wise. While my brain does giddy little jumps at the idea of a Claude/Peter/Nathan menage à trois, I really don't know if I could pull that off. Enjoy the movie that's playing in your mind :)

I look forward to your next chapter (hey, is that the one where the sex kicks in?) whenever it arrives :)

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