Wearing the inside out, 22a/22
anonymous
August 29 2010, 22:16:45 UTC
The days blur together at the edges. Saito's leads have led him to a run-down corner in Burma where Eames had already left. It's the subsequent tracking from place to place that's tricky. He flies all over the world, visits countless dream dens and bars and motels - but mostly dream dens - only to be just a couple hours too late.
Cobb calls him with news that Turner's company had literally been destroyed overnight, that the man's predicament he'd been left in was treated at a hospital with an amputation, and that James and Phillipa now have a puppy and are asking when uncle Arthur and Eames will come visit and play with them
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You know, I'll think about a sequel. I had originally planned to just leave the story there, but if I can get my muse going, I will definitely try to write it. School's starting in a few weeks, though, so updates would be much slower.
AND I WOULD TOTALLY LOVE IT IF YOU ALSO TOOK A SHOT AT THE PROMPT!! As the person who originally prompted this, that would just be...orgasmic. Seeing someone else's take on it. And with more hurt/comfort than mine, y/y?
Thank you to everyone else, also, for all the comments! I'm amazed I actually stuck with this fic and didn't abandon it halfway through, like I usually do when I try to write. <3
Re: Wearing the inside out, 22b/22 ENDcaediAugust 30 2010, 03:28:19 UTC
I only just found this yesterday, but am ridiculously glad I did cause I'm not sure I could have handled waiting for updates (no matter how quick)-- seriously last night before I went to bed all I could think about was "hope there is an update when I wake up!" and there is, and it's fantastic. This is absolutely amazing, the slow build up of angst at the beginning, and the inevitable break up oh god T_T all leading to this brilliant ending ♥ AND OH GOD, ARTHUR IN THE PART 21 WAS AWESOME, GAH. Thanks so much for writing this, obviously would adore to read any sequel-- LOVE IT ♥
Re: Wearing the inside out, 22b/22 END
anonymous
September 4 2010, 09:28:38 UTC
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I like how in the beginning it was building toward Arthur angst but then he was like "wait a minute, I'm a badass QGMF' and then Cobb's like "Pho Sho man" and then Saito's like "word" and then they all did the bamf secret handshake and took care of buisness like the suave motherfuckers they are. (Clearly I am a master of the English language)
Loved it. I may try my hand at this promt as well, if you don't mind. Haven't written in a long time, so no promises, but I want to.
Captcha says "ramble lathon". That should be part of the fanfiction olympics.
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Cobb calls him with news that Turner's company had literally been destroyed overnight, that the man's predicament he'd been left in was treated at a hospital with an amputation, and that James and Phillipa now have a puppy and are asking when uncle Arthur and Eames will come visit and play with them ( ... )
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Also, if possible, I'd like to take a shot at the prompt...maybe?
~Thedummie2
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AND I WOULD TOTALLY LOVE IT IF YOU ALSO TOOK A SHOT AT THE PROMPT!! As the person who originally prompted this, that would just be...orgasmic. Seeing someone else's take on it. And with more hurt/comfort than mine, y/y?
Thank you to everyone else, also, for all the comments! I'm amazed I actually stuck with this fic and didn't abandon it halfway through, like I usually do when I try to write. <3
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I like how in the beginning it was building toward Arthur angst but then he was like "wait a minute, I'm a badass QGMF' and then Cobb's like "Pho Sho man" and then Saito's like "word" and then they all did the bamf secret handshake and took care of buisness like the suave motherfuckers they are.
(Clearly I am a master of the English language)
Loved it. I may try my hand at this promt as well, if you don't mind. Haven't written in a long time, so no promises, but I want to.
Captcha says "ramble lathon". That should be part of the fanfiction olympics.
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