the ultimate form of vulnerability

Apr 27, 2004 14:50

A slight touch of hands and sweeping of the hair, then wave of gooseflesh rippled about my lengthly fair skin. Gripping hands seduce these hourglass figures and foggy breaths smite pretty necks. Lips trace my shoulders, my neck, the pulse of life beneath my jaw. Lusty glances insinuate we indulge in pleasures of the flesh, as brown eyes which most ( Read more... )

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auntyoptisme April 27 2004, 20:18:52 UTC
you haven't posted in so long!

are you still going to come to santa cruz?

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anonymous May 1 2004, 01:42:37 UTC
Very interesting entry...the contrast of lust and love, and the deflowering of innocence.

Jean-Michel

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anonymous May 1 2004, 01:46:10 UTC
You have a way with words that makes the meanings and images come alive, and you write romantically evry well. A sure makr of talent.

Jean

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Virginity Lost h3h0wn May 13 2004, 01:20:46 UTC
Interesting. Are we to assume that this is personal experience? Or just creative writing? Either way I got chills down my spine.

You should read my rooftop post.

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