Captain Raydor's Secret Admirer (1/2)

[imustgofirst]

Category: The Closer
Pairing: Brenda/Sharon (of course)
Rating: T, just to be safe
Word Count: 12,593 (total)
Summary: It does what it says on the tin: Captain Raydor finds herself the recipient of the attentions of a secret admirer. No poetry or designer footwear was harmed in the writing of this fic. Cracky fluff ahoy.

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Comments

[rahleeyah]

i guess i didn't pay any attention to the fact that it says 1/2 because i got to the end and was yelling at my computer because i thought it hadn't finished loading the page :/ i need MOAR of this, stat. as always, your writing is lovely, and i really realllllllllly wanna know where this is going! i adore your insights into sharon, i love the way you get inside her head. update soon?

[1000ships]

I'm seconding Leah on the 'more please!' I'm sure my face was comically disappointed when I reached the end of the page.

I never fail to adore your incarnations of our favorite ladies. Sharon's thought processes and wit? Love it. And I feel like Andy might be a Cyrano of sorts.

ETA: I just read this again and had to say that the detail and thought you've put into the gifts, and how each illuminates a facet of Sharon's personality and adds to her backstory is really delightful.

[a_proposito]

oh yes, please, MORE! i think i actually said "OH NO!" out loud when i got to the end of the page..

[margotgrissom]

What a brilliant read! Not only is it excruciatingly well-written - as always with you - but I am loving Brenda pursuing Sharon like that. And as much as I love angst, it is very nice to read something more lighthearted once in a while.

I absolutely cannot wait for the second part. *bats eyelashes*

[kdtb]

Oh this is so good! I love flirty Sharon/Brenda :) I can't wait to read the second half...

The gifts are really spot on, and I can totally imagine how happy and pleased Sharon would be by it all. I loved the bar scene, that subtle sexiness to their interactions... so good!