My first song.

[imurlilbuttafly]

I'm going to be very busy before the holidays, but I took the time to write a poem.

Smile

My angel
My heart is so full
Your eyes light me up
When will we kiss?

Your laughter
Dries all of my tears
Smile for me my love
I'm now in blissI know it's kinda lame, and I'm not really done yet, but...I just wanted to show it to someone. Please, be gentle

Comments

[iwontdieavirgin]

Oh, man, Jounouchi. I always knew you were a pussy, but this... EWW.

[imurlilbuttafly]

It...it can't be that bad. It comes from my heart...

[iwontdieavirgin]

More like it comes from your scrawny ass. Grow some balls, you sorry excuse for a man.

[occultbishie]

That's so beautiful, Jounouchi. I like to write songs, but... I just can't find the words right now since I always wrote about Honda and I love someone else now.

And ignore Ryou. He's mean, and he's trying to trick poor Mahaado-san into going to a sleazy strip club.

[imurlilbuttafly]

Oh, I'd love to read yours someday. I'm glad you like mine.

[occultbishie]

*blush* O... Okay. I'll try to come up with the courage to post some of mine.

[iliketobeabitch]

What a shitty emo poem. Did you cut yourself thinking about how no one will ever love you while writing this?

[imurlilbuttafly]

No, I didn't...

[iliketobeabitch]

Grab a razor and get it over with, emo kid.

[graceful_legs]

Do you mind keeping you idiotic and rude comments to yourself?!

[qu33nofthi3v3s]

That was . . .

Okay, I can't fucking say it. Really, I just can't.
I don't think words for it have been invented yet.

[occultbishie]

I know! It's just so sweet and tender and romantic... *swoons* It's okay to not have words for it, Bakura-san. He's a very good poet, and good poetry often drives one to tears and to a lack of expressions.

[imurlilbuttafly]

You...you didn't like it?

[graceful_legs]

Oh, Jounouchi-kun, that's so sweet. You should really finish it and write more. It seems like you have a gift.

[imurlilbuttafly]

Why...thank you. This...this means so much to me.