Wow! A really vivid scene, the images are so intense... I love very much the way you made Kurogane so captured by the sight and the way Fay feels Kuro's eyes on him, almost hurting! <3
Okay, so I have not been reading the Kuro/Fay posting because I've only watched like 3 eps of TRC and hard telling when I will watch more but I love your Bleach stuff so much that I had to start reading them.
This is just beautiful. I love the vivid imagery of it.
That was amazing *-* It was short and simple, but it was also very powerful *w* I like the way Kurogane stared at Fai like that and took his image in <3 That's really sweet of him <33 It wasn't quite what I expected for the "Church" fic, but I really like it =3
That was so great! Short ones like this are sometimes best - I think if you'd made it longer it would have lost something. There's a very vivid yet natural word flow thing you have going on, and it works well. ^_^
Kaaa!! I've been hoping you'd post something! I loved the intense imagert here. Absolutely breaktaking and very well written. Loved it, loved it, loved it!(yeesh, I feel like Mokona now. Damn my sucky comments)
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Okay, so I have not been reading the Kuro/Fay posting because I've only watched like 3 eps of TRC and hard telling when I will watch more but I love your Bleach stuff so much that I had to start reading them.
This is just beautiful. I love the vivid imagery of it.
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(I recommend reading TRC over watching it, btw. The manga is a whole lot better than the anime.)
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It was short and simple, but it was also very powerful *w*
I like the way Kurogane stared at Fai like that and took his image in <3 That's really sweet of him <33
It wasn't quite what I expected for the "Church" fic, but I really like it =3
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Thank you!
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