I love the way Luca's eyes just barely open when we wakes up, and he peers out before moving his body or even his head. It's like he's gotta check out what's happening and see if he really wants to wake up, afterall.
Okay, so...I owe some big apologies and big thank yous. Under no circumstances is it alright that I let it go three weeks before
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For CH I can only suggest to re-read previous chapters. In writing my o-fiction (novel length one) I would get sidetracked by real life or I would just feel removed from the characters. It's a battle sometimes but if you allow yourself from them to pull you into their lives... you'll write easier. At least that that works for me.
Oh, and think only about emotions and the story - not about writing tools :-)
P.S. Luca is so gorgeous on the pics :-)
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