this took forever wtf

[ilkanta]

Title: ASD;LAFJASFL;anfsd
Series: LOVELESS
Characters|Pairing: Seimei/Ritsuka
Rating: pg-13 I THINK
Warnings: non-explicit incest and seimei's incredible creepiness. and language, but the language warning is useless by now
Notes: WRITEN FOR barreled, AND IS PORN-FREE TO BALANCE OUT HER SMUT. lmfao i have no idea where some of it came from and i think i

Comments

[griefer]

oh my god

[ilkanta]

lmfao

[griefer]

i have no idea how i'm even going to review this considering it was so perfect that i literally have no idea where to start

[ilkanta]

i forget that you're awake at retarded times

FFF I'M GLAD YOU LIKED IT BB?!

[griefer]

k here we go and forgive me for how disconnected and incoherent i'm sure this is going to sound

dfkds i don't even know where to start oh my god. you intro seimei perfectly, and i know you may not think it, but you've got his voice down perfectly. i love how you portray how he views the world -- like everything is dirty, worthless, except for ritsuka, because ritsuka's the only thing that really matters to him. ritsuka's the only thing that's actually clean, that isn't stained with the rest of the world and its problems and sins, and he's the only one that seimei wants to be around.

and ritsuka wanting to give seimei his ears, oh god. how fucking perfect. i can't even. AND SEIMEI LOL BEING THE CREEP THAT HE IS AND SAYING "oh i suppose." it's gotta make you wonder if ritsuka is ever going to look back on it one day and go WAIT WHAT.

also, the thing at the very end, about seimei testing ritsuka's love for him? yes. that's fucking perfect, and i really couldn't have worded it better myself

[ilkanta]

ilu2bb so forgive me for lacking the ability to reply to this except for

RITSUKA: SEIMEI DO YOU WANT MY VIRGINITY
SEIMEI: OKAY
RITSUKA: YAY 8DDD
SEIMEI: -DESTROYS RITSUKA'S BRAIN-

because that is essentially what happened.

[griefer]

lfdnkdlkn I MIGHT HAVE TO WRITE A RESPONSE FIC FOR THIS SITUATION BUT LOL WOULD THAT BE CREEPY...

[ilkanta]

you said this on purpose

[peaceful_fate]

8D...

Wow.

♥

Askldfas awesome! |o/

[ilkanta]

Thanks, bb. ♥

[bhujerba]

dude what i really like about your work is that every scene you write can stand on its own, and sometimes you almost want it to stand alone, but then you continue reading it all and it flows so well that you start to think that they can't possibly be separated and apart DID THAT MAKE SENSE whatever.

and hahaha i will admit, when i first saw this i was like "wow, this is long" and the fact that i have not read loveless beyond like chapter 20 made me be like "hahaha should i bother reading this right now whatev i'll read the first part for now" and um fuck now i'm finished with it fdlakjf hahaha but ffdsfsd you did a really great job with this, bro.

[bhujerba]

lol oops i didn't read your author's note and now i feel super repetitive and dumb hahahaha OH WELL ;;

[ilkanta]

For awhile I thought I already replied to this because I scrolled down the comments and I saw a yellow-ZP icon underneath yours

hey i got the right icon for this bro

[bhujerba]

awkward laugh