this took forever wtf

Oct 01, 2008 16:49

Title: ASD;LAFJASFL;anfsd
Series: LOVELESS
Characters|Pairing: Seimei/Ritsuka
Rating: pg-13 I THINK
Warnings: non-explicit incest and seimei's incredible creepiness. and language, but the language warning is useless by now
Notes: WRITEN FOR barreled, AND IS PORN-FREE TO BALANCE OUT HER SMUT. lmfao i have no idea where some of it came from and i think i ( Read more... )

!fics, fandom: loveless, friends: chelsey

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bhujerba October 1 2008, 22:11:21 UTC
dude what i really like about your work is that every scene you write can stand on its own, and sometimes you almost want it to stand alone, but then you continue reading it all and it flows so well that you start to think that they can't possibly be separated and apart DID THAT MAKE SENSE whatever.

and hahaha i will admit, when i first saw this i was like "wow, this is long" and the fact that i have not read loveless beyond like chapter 20 made me be like "hahaha should i bother reading this right now whatev i'll read the first part for now" and um fuck now i'm finished with it fdlakjf hahaha but ffdsfsd you did a really great job with this, bro.

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bhujerba October 1 2008, 22:12:53 UTC
lol oops i didn't read your author's note and now i feel super repetitive and dumb hahahaha OH WELL ;;

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ilkanta October 1 2008, 22:48:15 UTC
For awhile I thought I already replied to this because I scrolled down the comments and I saw a yellow-ZP icon underneath yours

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hey i got the right icon for this bro bhujerba October 1 2008, 22:49:17 UTC
awkward laugh

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ilkanta October 1 2008, 22:50:38 UTC
FFF IT MAKES SENSE, BRO. idk it's something I actually try to do, to see if I can get each scene to be able to read alone, but then I find it retardedly difficult to link it together. blah

everything I write is long, unless they're for drabble contests, at which case they are exactly at the word-limit and take me forever to tweak. a;slkfasf lol thanks bro.

all you need to know beyond chapter 20 is "WHEE FIGHTING" and seimei is a fucking creep.

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creepy sounds bhujerba October 1 2008, 22:51:42 UTC
jhonka jhonka

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ilkanta October 1 2008, 22:53:05 UTC
what the fuck is jhonka

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