Okay, another hug and critique :) please dont be mad at me :( i saw the growing writer in you and i want to help :( /whimper okay, first is it just me or u forgot the reason why L put sungjong in the club and left him for two days? XD and the amnesia thingy, before he doesnt care, i think he had to go curious first, bothered before settled, or hesitant and afraid first at the very least, because ppl just dont go on amnesia and doesnt care what happened i think :)it had a nice plot actually but sometimes u sound rushed on the plot while u can play with the plot more :) i'm really really sorry if i offend you, i'm gonna went thru ur entries because i like sungjong (and a stalker like that) cheers XD
Thank you for reading <3333333333 First of all, I'm very sorry for the hanging parts. I wrote this in two days and I kinda had to admit I rushed the plot because I was busy lol. And yeah I forgot to put the reason that L put sungjongie in the club /hit my head soooo sorry I'm just so forgetful like always >.<
Btw, to know you're a myungjong shipper really made me happy! XDD
Thanks for the comment!^^ I'll be less forgetful the next time lol.
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okay, first is it just me or u forgot the reason why L put sungjong in the club and left him for two days? XD and the amnesia thingy, before he doesnt care, i think he had to go curious first, bothered before settled, or hesitant and afraid first at the very least, because ppl just dont go on amnesia and doesnt care what happened i think :)it had a nice plot actually but sometimes u sound rushed on the plot while u can play with the plot more :)
i'm really really sorry if i offend you, i'm gonna went thru ur entries because i like sungjong (and a stalker like that)
cheers XD
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First of all, I'm very sorry for the hanging parts. I wrote this in two days and I kinda had to admit I rushed the plot because I was busy lol. And yeah I forgot to put the reason that L put sungjongie in the club /hit my head soooo sorry I'm just so forgetful like always >.<
Btw, to know you're a myungjong shipper really made me happy! XDD
Thanks for the comment!^^ I'll be less forgetful the next time lol.
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