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greenteam4ever November 8 2011, 19:47:21 UTC
Oh, I'm glad that Tess managed to get Chloe to see she had no reason to think that Ollie would want to forget her. But it must've been really heartbroking for her. And the same goes for Oliver when she told him the truth. I guess it'd be even harder when he actually remembers all his feelings duing the period she was gone. And what about them returning to their normal time? I can't even imagine. At least now they have each other, but when they are bach he'd have no idea where Chloe is. But I think she gave him a purpose when said she'll come back when it's time. Now he knows he'll see her eventually.
That was an amazing chapter, thanks so much! I'm looking forward to their meeting with Zee.

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ihearttvsnark November 9 2011, 03:11:55 UTC
Thank you! I'm so happy you liked this. Poor Chloe and Ollie are both having a rough time and they're kind of shaken at this point but desperately clinging to each other. It does help that now they both know they'll be together again but it's still hard. Glad you're looking forward to Zee. Thanks for the comments!

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queensil November 12 2011, 05:20:50 UTC
Hahahaha I loved this. <3
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I confess I'm not a fan of Tess's character, but at least in this fic, thank god she exists and she is, she was me hitting Chloe's head in the wall *methaphorically speaking lol* So well done! See the light Chloe! See the light! She saw it :D
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I just loved how you handled all those situations in the the Chlollie convo. So emotional, so awwwwwwwwn. Really good.
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Let me thinks if when Ollie come back at time he will remember that he will meet Chloe again in some point, because he knows now, but when he comes back it will be in Patriot times, and Icarus/Colaterall showed he was still sad thinking he wouldnt, so I'm looking forward to know what will happens >.<
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Can't wait for more! *as much can't wait for at least one more one-shot posted soon :P*
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xoxo

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ihearttvsnark November 13 2011, 06:37:40 UTC
Aw, thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying this story. :)

I really love Tess and it makes me happy that you like her here even if you weren't a fan on the show. I think the show never really knew what to do with her but I love Cassidy Freeman so much that I enjoyed all versions of Tess.

Thank you! I really wanted to give Chloe and Ollie a chance to get all their feelings out.

Hee! things will definitely be different when/if they go back to their regular timeline.

Aww...soon.

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