You're Lois as per usual is perfect! I love the beginning of this chapter!
"Lois stood in the hallway, arms crossed over her chest as she looked at Chloe’s closed bedroom door. It was times like this that she wished she had Clark’s x-ray vision so she could see exactly what her cousin was doing in there. Normally, she’d have no qualms about pushing the door open and investigating, but the little sneak had started locking her door at night and Lois did not appreciate it. She wanted to help Chloe, but it was hard to do that when her cousin was literally shutting her out." <== For some reason Lois wishing she had x-ray vision makes me chuckle. IDEK...I feel like saying be careful what you wish for haha. But also I really like how you start out with Lois obviously noticing the change in Chloe and knowing that she upset and Chloe locking the door...I'm not gonna lie that's funny. It's the only way she can keep Lois out
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Aw, thanks, Cori. You know how much I love Lois so that compliment always means a lot. :)
Hahahaha, Lois was so awesome when she had Clark's powers in that one episode and yes, a locked door is the only way to keep her out, and even that wouldn't have lasted much longer.
Clark is dumb and Chloe sort of did need to be slapped, but now she needs the hug. Well, now she needs a rescue...but a hug would be good too.
Hahahaha, Ollie has to snap at Clark because he says stupid things and he can't hit him or he'll hurt his hand. And thank you, I'm glad you liked the team stuff.
Thank you for taking away the mean words. They were extra hurtful. LMAO. Not really, if anyone knows how mean I am when it comes to writing, it's you...and you're still meaner than me. Thanks for reading. :)
ahh....that was so good and you leave it at that?!? :) Well, at least Oliver will come back for next chapter to save the day!BTW, advance Happy birthday :)
dun dun dun duuuun ugh y is Chlollie so stubborn? ): oh well i think they need a rescue and from there they'll have a good talk that will lead into them living happily ever after w/ many adorable blonde babies
You know that little threat I made in the last email I sent you? I'm doing it again. Why do you like to torture us, sister?? The fact that the fic is almost ending is torture enough
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I don't like when you threaten me, sister, because if anyone would follow through with it...
Aw, thank you! I'm glad this chapter fit into that because that was a great compliment.
Hee! Thank you! Lois is awesome and I'm so glad you like Clark. He is judgmental even when he's trying to be a friend, it's just who he is and Ollie is annoyed by him.
Poor Chloe is not having a good day. I'm happy you could see AM playing that scene. I'm sad it's almost over too, but I hope you enjoy the last three chapters.
Hahahahaha, I love that you already managed to use that today. Best sister ever.
You are just torturing me here. I mean, seriously, how much do you think one girl can take? You get Oliver's ass back here now so he can go and save our fair maider...or at least so that when she saves herself they can actually have a real conversation about their relationship. Plus, making up is a whole lot more fun when you are in the same time zone.
Aw, I'm sorry. If it makes you feel better, I'm pretty sure this is the last chapter that has a cliffhanger. I'm not saying the next ones will be sunshine and light, but I don't think there's any shocking endings. Hahaha, they do have some making up to do! Thanks for reading, I'm glad you're still enjoying this. Sorry about the torture. :)
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"Lois stood in the hallway, arms crossed over her chest as she looked at Chloe’s closed bedroom door. It was times like this that she wished she had Clark’s x-ray vision so she could see exactly what her cousin was doing in there. Normally, she’d have no qualms about pushing the door open and investigating, but the little sneak had started locking her door at night and Lois did not appreciate it. She wanted to help Chloe, but it was hard to do that when her cousin was literally shutting her out." <== For some reason Lois wishing she had x-ray vision makes me chuckle. IDEK...I feel like saying be careful what you wish for haha. But also I really like how you start out with Lois obviously noticing the change in Chloe and knowing that she upset and Chloe locking the door...I'm not gonna lie that's funny. It's the only way she can keep Lois out ( ... )
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Hahahaha, Lois was so awesome when she had Clark's powers in that one episode and yes, a locked door is the only way to keep her out, and even that wouldn't have lasted much longer.
Clark is dumb and Chloe sort of did need to be slapped, but now she needs the hug. Well, now she needs a rescue...but a hug would be good too.
Hahahaha, Ollie has to snap at Clark because he says stupid things and he can't hit him or he'll hurt his hand. And thank you, I'm glad you liked the team stuff.
Thank you for taking away the mean words. They were extra hurtful. LMAO. Not really, if anyone knows how mean I am when it comes to writing, it's you...and you're still meaner than me. Thanks for reading. :)
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Thanks for reading and commenting AND for the early birthday wishes. :)
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ugh y is Chlollie so stubborn? ):
oh well i think they need a rescue and from there they'll have a good talk that will lead into them living happily ever after w/ many adorable blonde babies
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Aw, thank you! I'm glad this chapter fit into that because that was a great compliment.
Hee! Thank you! Lois is awesome and I'm so glad you like Clark. He is judgmental even when he's trying to be a friend, it's just who he is and Ollie is annoyed by him.
Poor Chloe is not having a good day. I'm happy you could see AM playing that scene. I'm sad it's almost over too, but I hope you enjoy the last three chapters.
Hahahahaha, I love that you already managed to use that today. Best sister ever.
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