Oh no that ending!!!!!!!!!!. Just when Chloe was ready to fix everything, ugh I had a sense something like this was going to happen, after Lex fired her ugh.
Hahaha, well at least I'm killing you in the best possible way. :) If it makes you feel better, this is the last cliffhanger. Thanks so much for reading and commenting.
If it makes you feel better, this is probably the last cliffhanger...in this story. ;)
No need to apologize, people are get busy. I couldn't tell you the last time I actually sat down and read fanfic. I'm glad you're still enjoying this story.
I honestly think Oliver's conversation with Clark is my favorite dialogue in this entire story! I'm not going to lie, I wasn't really feeling bad for Chloe because I felt she did it to herself for pushing Oliver away for a second time, and that she deserved to feel the full and complete impact of her decision. But while I felt bad for Oliver, as the guys expressed how bad Chloe's choice had affected him and the way he was even taking it out on the team, I was really happy with how he handled Clark telling him to go back to Chloe
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Wow, thank you. I'm glad you liked that scene so much. *nods* That's sort of what I was going for with Chloe. She did a stupid thing and now she has to deal with the consequences. (Not that being kidnapped is a consequence, that's a little too harsh, but you know what I mean).
Ollie is bitter and no matter what he says, part of it is about his pride, but I'm really glad the rest came across because he is hurting too and he's struggling because he's the type of person who needs to fight for what he wants, but at the same time, how much can one guy take?
Thank you! I like catching people off guard even though I think everyone pretty much knew Lex was going to eventually kidnap Chloe but I'm glad it's not too predictable. Next chapter should be up this weekend. :)
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Can't wait to read more, so close to the ending!.
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That was such a cliffhanger. You have to update REAL soon...no really you have to. I can't wait to know what happens next!
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Yeah, the cliffhanger was kind of mean, but the next chapter should be up in the next few days. Thanks again for reading. :)
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You're killing me, girl! In the best way possible, of course. ;)
Yay for updates.
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First off, sorry it took me so long to get to this, but know that this is a great chapter and I can't wait for the next one.
(sorry, kind of a sucky comment, but I'm pretty sure I'd be repeating myself more if I said anymore)
Oh, and in case I forget, happy early b-day. Hopefully you have a great day tomorrow.
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If it makes you feel better, this is probably the last cliffhanger...in this story. ;)
No need to apologize, people are get busy. I couldn't tell you the last time I actually sat down and read fanfic. I'm glad you're still enjoying this story.
Thanks for the early birthday wishes! :)
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Wow, thank you. I'm glad you liked that scene so much. *nods* That's sort of what I was going for with Chloe. She did a stupid thing and now she has to deal with the consequences. (Not that being kidnapped is a consequence, that's a little too harsh, but you know what I mean).
Ollie is bitter and no matter what he says, part of it is about his pride, but I'm really glad the rest came across because he is hurting too and he's struggling because he's the type of person who needs to fight for what he wants, but at the same time, how much can one guy take?
Thank you! I like catching people off guard even though I think everyone pretty much knew Lex was going to eventually kidnap Chloe but I'm glad it's not too predictable. Next chapter should be up this weekend. :)
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