Title: Freefall in Building 'A' Author: idontlikegravy Genre: AU Rating: PG Warnings/Spoilers: None Challenge: What If...? challenge for
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Tessa, I love you, and I have done since your little speech about talking about beheadings in the pilot.
I think you've done a beautiful job of what if, here. You caught all their voices well, particularly Tessa's at the end; that little scene just rang so true.
I always find Tessa a little tricky to write, so I'm glad she rang true. For once I could hear her as I wrote this one. Perhaps it helped that I was watching the episodes in question. :)
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If you love them, perhaps you might have time to write one for flashfic this month? *she says hopefully with her mod hat on* ;)
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It was worth a shot *shrug*
*passes out virtual choc-ices to help with brain fry*
Mmm..fried brains...
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Ah, Richie. :D
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I think you've done a beautiful job of what if, here. You caught all their voices well, particularly Tessa's at the end; that little scene just rang so true.
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I always find Tessa a little tricky to write, so I'm glad she rang true. For once I could hear her as I wrote this one. Perhaps it helped that I was watching the episodes in question. :)
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