Comments | idioticonion: FIC: Outside the box (2/?) HIMYM

idioticonion

FIC: Outside the box (2/?) HIMYM

Jan 05, 2010 18:57

Part 2

There was a sound, like the rustle of feathers and then a blossoming warmth, as though someone had just dropped a log on an open fire.

Lily blurted "Tell me you just saw that!" and grabbed Marshall's arm. They'd both gone horribly pale.

"What? What?" Robin said irritably, twisting awkwardly in the booth to look behind her, ( Read more... )

chara: ensemble, fiction: himym, alternative universe, 10 titles challenge, pairing: barney/robin, series: outside the box

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idioticonion January 6 2010, 09:33:16 UTC

Thanks honey! There was a total perv!laugh in there! :-)

I'm so glad you like it. I'm not sure where I'm going with it but I think this story has definite potetial. It reminds me of back in the day when I used to write long, rambling stories with no point to them, like Home! Hehe.

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idioticonion January 6 2010, 09:38:51 UTC

Oh totaly. There WILL be something smutty, I'm just not sure HOW explicit I'll go yet.

To be honest, most of my stories in the last year have had a game plan when I sit down to write them. Certainly Family did, recently. But I used to write huge, rambling things with no point and they were so much fun! Home is a good example of that. I tend to find a plot as I go along, so I'm going to try and do that with Outside The Box. I do have some ideas for a greater arc, but nothing I'm particularly satisfied with.

hermione_solo January 15 2010, 18:08:57 UTC

*cough* sorry for the minie freak out. but honestly, this is gorgeous and hearbreaking and I had been missing that. I do wonder how they reacted after Ted told them Barney was an angel though because the awkward would of been uncomfortable and epic. but aaah! I love it!

idioticonion January 15 2010, 18:27:42 UTC

Oooo, that's interesting. I may explore that.

ocelot_summer January 15 2010, 23:37:56 UTC

Oh man. Normally Death!HIMYM makes me wary, but this... oh man oh man. This is EPIC. I kind of have a... wing thing. I believe the only thing better than my favorite characters, is my favorite characters with wings. :D

Love it so far! I love Ted and Angel!Barney's interaction, and Barney with Robin... Oh yes. :) Touching wings = turn on? Awesome. This is gonna be fuuuuun.

idioticonion January 15 2010, 23:44:55 UTC

Thank you! I will try and write more and update soon. I have a "wing thing" too. :-)

crossgate_teri March 18 2012, 19:13:45 UTC

I haven't found it yet, but I really hope there is a part 3 out here somewhere to find. I would love to see more of Angel Barney.