FIC - ETHER (JACOB/BELLA)

[idealfacade]

Title: Ether
Author: idealfacade
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance/Drama/Mystery
Characters/Pairings: Jacob/Bella, Edward/Bella
Prompt: o1 Brand New Colony
Short summary: Bella and Jacob literally step through the looking-glass. Here they find themselves in a world as it could have been and, in the end, it’s up to them whether to stay there or somehow find their

Comments

[idealfacade]

*chuckles* You just pounce on anything J/B, eh?

I HAVE JUST AN OUNCE OF A CLUE OF WHAT'S GOING ON, SRSLY. I KNOW THE GIST BUT J/B ARE TAKING ME ON A RIDE.

I hope it doesn't suck completely.

[idealfacade]

YEAH, I HAVE NO IDEA WHY HE'S THERE BUT I TOTALLY THOUGHT OF YOU AS I WROTE HIM IN. Did I do him justice, so far?

I liked that part to, although "forfeit" used to be "lost" but I used that word way too much, so it changed.

OMG, compliments! You liked the dialogue? I can die happy since sometimes I think it's stupid but, for some reason, I can't edit shit like that out.

Aw, you reassure me of what i felt sorta insecure about in this fic. You're a doll!

[idealfacade]

Rip Van Winkle? Sorry, I'm unfamiliar with it. What is that about?

[idealfacade]

Oh, it sounds interesting!

Hah, i don't kid myself thinking what i'm writing is really novel but I like to think you'll be in for a few surprises, hmm? ;)

[returnofthegaze]

OMG. That was really well written, and...wow.

[petitecherie]

Wow. This was so different, yet so breathtaking to read. Really excellent work! I'm stoked for pt2. :)