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FIC - ETHER (JACOB/BELLA)

Sep 24, 2007 12:48

Title: Ether
Author: idealfacade
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance/Drama/Mystery
Characters/Pairings: Jacob/Bella, Edward/Bella
Prompt: o1 Brand New Colony
Short summary: Bella and Jacob literally step through the looking-glass. Here they find themselves in a world as it could have been and, in the end, it’s up to them whether to stay there or somehow find their ( Read more... )

j/b, twilight, twilight tables, fic: ether, my fic

Comments 21

foresworn September 24 2007, 22:49:57 UTC

Loved it! =D Part two, please!!

mouthsopen September 25 2007, 00:42:25 UTC

YES

OMG YES

...that's all you have reduced me to, really. So many lovely lines and dialogue and I am stoked that this is a multichaptered story.

marooned4life September 25 2007, 03:29:44 UTC

that was sooo good! can't wait to read the rest!

hhhellcat September 25 2007, 03:33:41 UTC

Lovely, lovely imagery. It flows and then it feels disjointed in places, just like you'd expect it to with things falling apart for them. Very intriguing.

seemedsobright September 25 2007, 05:28:42 UTC

This is really, really good! I love the style of the narration, it's very pretty. Can't wait for more!

idealfacade September 25 2007, 05:33:17 UTC

oomg, girl! How is college??? See, I was thinking of coming up there today or tomorrow but I feel it's rather dumb to do that if i'm going up there Thursday & FRiday already. Plus, I'm relishing my last moments of nothingness.

And, you read my J/B? I am so touched. Or are you just bored?

Plus, where be the hot guys?

seemedsobright September 25 2007, 06:09:49 UTC

Are you getting meal points? If you're going to be on campus for a long time you should get meal points or set up a TritonPlus account (which turns your ID card into like a debit). just have your mom put some money on it so she won't have to keep giving you cash for food. And trust me you will get hungry because the hills at SD are fucking bitches. My thighs are sore because I went to see Ryan at ERC today. But ERC is beautiful, OMG!! His dorm room is smaller than mine but his common area is huge with a really nice couch and a balcony. It's incredible. The cafeteria there, Cafe Ventanas, is really good, and so is the Marshall one, Ocean View Terrace. Sixth's food, Foodworx, is really good, but there's not much variety so I'll get sick of that easily ( ... )

idealfacade September 25 2007, 16:36:54 UTC

No, but it sounds interesting. How do you apply? or where, Miss UCSD? I know ERC is beautiful, too bad I don't live there, grr. I liked Cafe Ventanas, but which cafeteria is the best best? I only have that one and the Marshall or Warren one to go of on.

I'm sorry. At least you're getting more social activity than i am at the moment? Who has the potential to be my friend in your suite? Or am I not compatible with any?

To be honest, the only good Twilight fanfic I've seen comes from the J/B side. You can check out sortofbeautiful if you're interested or I have two more stories from this 'verse. But i must absolutely get you to read this one:

http://anythingbutgrey.livejournal.com/318110.html#cutid1

You will thank me, 'cause it's real good (and short).

Was he blond?