And here's the second regular meme! Feel free to go crazy! The next meme that should be posted sometime on March 1 will be a special meme of some sort. If you have any suggestions, please see the page-a-mod post.
Okay, so I didn't include any of this batch in the last concrit post, but these are some of my most recent work: Well, technically this batch was made before the last concrit post too, but these have all been made in 2015 and I think they're somewhat better than most icons i've made prior to this year so I think it'd be useful to get concrit on them too. It's a mix of my favourites & ones I am not perfectly happy with but can't really tell why (#3, #9, #10)
Part 1: Icon 3 concritslytheringurrlFebruary 19 2015, 03:01:24 UTC
Hey! So, icon three seems too sharpened and IMO, too pale, but that's a personal preference. By sharpening less in her face, Marion would still stand out but it wouldn't be as edged and sharp. But, I do love your use of the far crop. Since you were supposed to make it a muted colored icon (ugh, I didn't see that until I remade the icon), you could bring up the brightness a little and make the icon muted instead of dreary. RN, the icon looks more dark than muted so here's what I did to change that:
RE: Part 1: Icon 3 concrithbicsFebruary 20 2015, 20:59:38 UTC
It actually hadn't even dawned on me to colour with a multiply layer, so this helps a lot!! I'm really excited to make my next batch now and play with it.
And yeah, I made it kind of dreary because I wasn't sure the lighter look was as muted, but looking at it compared to the full colour, it definitely still qualifies, and fixes the issue I was having with the icon, thanks!
Hi guys! I'm new, but always looking for icon crit on how to improve, so I hope this is OK. =) I'll be back within the next two days to comment on yours as well <3 Thank you!!
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Okay, so I didn't include any of this batch in the last concrit post, but these are some of my most recent work:
Well, technically this batch was made before the last concrit post too, but these have all been made in 2015 and I think they're somewhat better than most icons i've made prior to this year so I think it'd be useful to get concrit on them too.
It's a mix of my favourites & ones I am not perfectly happy with but can't really tell why (#3, #9, #10)
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RN, the icon looks more dark than muted so here's what I did to change that:
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I'm really excited to make my next batch now and play with it.
And yeah, I made it kind of dreary because I wasn't sure the lighter look was as muted, but looking at it compared to the full colour, it definitely still qualifies, and fixes the issue I was having with the icon, thanks!
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I'll be back within the next two days to comment on yours as well <3 Thank you!!
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