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Eridanos - Entry 03b - Kiley

Aug 27, 2006 20:03

Continued from previous post

( 54 pictures behind the cut )

Comments 22

tenna August 28 2006, 07:11:11 UTC

Ooooer! I truly love these stories. :D They're such fun to read! I especially love Kiley and Ripp's characters. Keep up the good work! I especially love the length and amount of text put into these as well. :)

iceraptoress August 28 2006, 23:22:59 UTC

Thank you so much for the compliment. It really means alot, and I'm especially glad that you didn't mind the length. I was really worried that would put people off from reading it.

kin_thalas August 28 2006, 08:06:34 UTC

Poor Kiley! I really hate her father and his violence!
I like this band of good friends, and I like very much that you inserted the Grunt boys in your story :)

iceraptoress August 28 2006, 23:24:04 UTC

Thank you! That really means alot coming from you! ^_^

kin_thalas August 31 2006, 06:18:10 UTC

*blush* :)

m_kir August 28 2006, 10:05:12 UTC

This is a great storyline. I missed the first 2 parts when they were first posted, but I'm going to keep an eye out on any new parts from now on.

iceraptoress August 28 2006, 23:25:07 UTC

Thank you for reading and taking the time to reply. I really appreciate it. And I love your icon! That kills me every time I see it! :D

simantics August 28 2006, 18:08:14 UTC

Oh wow, this was amazing! I was so happy when I saw that the next part of Eridanos was out, I about died. Poor Kiley! I love the sparkly softness of the Faraway Land snapshots, and the love triangle that's going on with Kiley, Ripp, and Dustin has me with bated breath. I am automatically sympathetic to the gay kids so Ripp has a special place in my heart, but I feel just awful for sweet Kiley, who really is a princess. Her father's such a jerkoff and she's so strong for being able to say so determinedly sweet and resilient ( ... )

iceraptoress August 28 2006, 23:37:47 UTC

Thank you thank you for the compliment and for not minding the length. I really like long posts, but I was afraid this was going a little overboard. ^^;; Thing was, though, that there was a lot I wanted to have happen before I cycle back around to Dustin's next entry (after Dominic's, but as of yet, Dominic's not affected by the main events in the story) so that's why it ended up running so long ( ... )

laridian August 28 2006, 22:24:35 UTC

As always, an excellent installment and great pictures. (I'm jealous! ;D ) I guess I'm just worried that there won't be any happy endings for anyone. Like, I want to hope that Kiley will go on to college and escape her father and her life in the Commons, but I worry that none of that will happen - that she'll end up dead or dead-end (pick which is worse) and without any hope. I guess I worry about that for all the Eridanos characters, actually. ^^;; Any way you can put my fears to rest, or are they all just doomed?

All the kids looked really good in this one (nice outfits/hair combos!) and I liked that Kiley is finally finding a female friend to hang out with. Here's hoping their friendship lasts. ^_^ And I love Kiley's interest in entomology! Like I said, I really hope she can break free and follow her college dreams. :)

It was a long wait, but it was worth it! :D

iceraptoress August 28 2006, 23:50:45 UTC

*laughs* Noooo, the kids are not all doomed! I'm not that cruel! I've actually plotted this story to extend into (and even beyond when I'm feeling really wild and ambitious) their college years, so you can rest assured that at least some of them are going. Of course, that being said, going to college doesn't necessarily ensure happiness or success. ^_~ It wouldn't be any fun if I wrapped everything up into neat happy little packages too quickly ( ... )